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Summer Rain

Summer Rain In the softening light of dull rain swept days, A blessed interlude from the Summer heat, A lone song bird in a sudden puddle plays On the sweet scented earth or the rain washed street. And the sun warmed withered leaves, once scorched and dry, Drip with rainbow jewels under Payne’s Grey sky. Passing breezes hurry rainy clouds along, Giving way to melodies of Summer’s song. Rispetto a-b-a-b-c-c-d-d 11 sylables per line 07/08/17

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Date: 8/6/2017 6:49:00 AM
Barry this is so cool, the sights and sounds of a summer rain; awesome plus I learned a new form ~ rispetto. Must try it.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/6/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, Phil. I think the Rispetto is ideal for this type of subject. // Barry.
Date: 7/8/2017 6:41:00 PM
This poem is simply gorgeous Barry! I love the playful imagery of the songbird bathing in the puddles after the rain. Your imagery is so clear and lovely I feel like I am there in the scene. A fave from me on this beauty! : )
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/9/2017 4:01:00 AM
Thank you very much for your Fav, Connie, I am pleased you enjoyed it.. I like this form, I will use it again. // Barry.
Date: 7/8/2017 5:59:00 PM
Pleasant to read :) Glad you liked my Icecream addiction poem :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/9/2017 3:58:00 AM
Thank you Debbie. // Barry
Date: 7/8/2017 3:09:00 PM
delightful imagery Barry thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/9/2017 4:02:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry.
Date: 7/8/2017 11:10:00 AM
That was a pleasure to read Barry :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/8/2017 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Gary, we need summer rain around here. // Barry
Date: 7/8/2017 10:41:00 AM
To notch, poetry here, Barry. It has a soothing effect on this reader:)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/8/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Daniel. I have not tried this form before, I like the feel of it. // Barry
Date: 7/8/2017 10:01:00 AM
I love this one Barry. So beautiful. I love the line drip with rainbow jewels under Payne's grey sky. :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/9/2017 3:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi. I am pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry

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