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Summer Love

Nature is generous to give a good sight life is in full acceptance of this might the longer is the trouser worn by light from four to twenty two, deprived is night, the sun is eager, the neighbourhood stays bright. The city booms with different colours, the countryside graces as the major donor variety gives out everything to wish for adventures and recreation, beauty isn’t poor activities for the living, always giving more. The soul is energized, ready to shine enjoyment, proving to have extra spine what is for the day is also mine traveling, swimming, music, all is fine plans have mobilized and put them in a line. Fun is expectant and has opened a file the need to beat last year’s record by a mile, is worth every penny of time’s redial. The beach creation of sea-sand aisle, calms the waters for tourists to smile. I love the flowers and butterflies above I love the family reunions that don’t evolve I love the puzzles that aren’t difficult to solve I love the busy towns formed by many curves. All these, well packaged to give me summer love. Published: 6/24/2020 For the Summer Love Poetry contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke. Placement: 2nd Position (7/4/2020)

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Date: 12/6/2020 1:24:00 AM
A lovely creative litany of sensual and mental delights. The reading gives pleasure that parallels those that you describe so well. Well written! Funom. [Spell checker calls you ‘Fun on!] Nice!
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Date: 7/7/2020 8:31:00 AM
Honest, soothing and nostalgic emotions of summer observations Funom. This is gorgeous. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Aditi
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Aditi
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Aditi
Date: 7/5/2020 9:11:00 AM
Summer fun expressed so beautifully Funom! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie
Date: 7/4/2020 4:03:00 PM
Congrats on a great win!;)
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Date: 7/17/2020 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Brenda
Date: 6/28/2020 11:06:00 PM
This is thrillingly lovely, and well rhymed and well said. Best of wishes for the contest.
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Evelyn
Date: 6/25/2020 5:36:00 PM
I enjoyed this beautiful poem. Very nice :)
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi sands
Date: 6/25/2020 1:32:00 AM
G'day Funom … certainly reading a summer poem like yours inspires me to yearn for the warmth now that we are in the dearth of winter - thank you Funom - Lindsay
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Date: 6/25/2020 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Lindsay for your encouraging words.
Date: 6/24/2020 6:34:00 AM
Sounds beautiful ... Great imagery
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One

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