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Soft lights with warm winds pirouetting in time whispering its music so perfectly in rhyme Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess Moonlight in concert reflecting its bliss Starlight's twinkle, a pretentious first kiss Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess The concert of summer called gently your name Softly, by this music into my life you came Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess. 08/10/2018 Summer Breeze Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Sanket Jain

Date: 10/7/2019 8:21:00 PM

Hello Charlie. That's a good read. From very first line alliteration started. ?? searching for love and concert of summer are lovely. The refrain worked here and it suits nicely. Keep in touch.

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/7/2018 4:42:00 PM

Hello Charlie, Congratulations on your "Win" here!! This lyric is a true pleasure to read. Most wondrously-conceived and most marvelously-expressed!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes, Gary

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/8/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thanks Garry...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/23/2018 3:20:00 PM

A poet's poem Charlie! Lovely! Congratulations on your win. : )

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/23/2018 3:50:00 PM

Thank you Connie...

Anil Deo

Date: 8/13/2018 4:54:00 PM

O yes! This one hit it out of the park in Line 1, so perfect & original, yet emotionally rich. Then sustained all the way to the end. Glad the judge/s couldn't resist your lyrics. Amen & shalom

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/14/2018 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Anil...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/13/2018 10:28:00 AM

Hi Charlie, seems like congratulations are in order for a win with this exceptional write. The imagery and the words sing Charlie. excellent write. This gem goes into my faves. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/13/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Mike...

Larry Bradfield

Date: 8/12/2018 10:37:00 PM

Well done, Charlie! Congratulations

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/13/2018 10:18:00 AM

Thank you Larry...

Curtis Johnson

Date: 8/12/2018 6:21:00 PM

Congrats, Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/13/2018 10:18:00 AM

Thank you Curtis...

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2018 4:03:00 PM

Beautiful Charlie. Congratulations for your win :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/13/2018 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Heidi...

John Hamilton

Date: 8/12/2018 1:25:00 PM

So nice Charlie, congrats on a fine win!

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/12/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you very much John...

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/11/2018 5:41:00 PM

Beautifully done...

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/12/2018 10:26:00 AM

Thank you Pashang...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/10/2018 8:35:00 PM

Oh, Charlie - I mean oh, oh, oh my, is this beautiful and beyond sweetness with lilting, lifting, touching bliss- imagery that determined I FAV this and save this and right now, RAVE about this. My poetry adrenaline and I are, at this moment, totally sated. Charlie, this is excellent writing! I'm in love with your poem ... CayCay

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/11/2018 9:19:00 AM

That is so very nice of you CayCay, Thank You...