Summer

doused in sudor i leant to wall on exposed roof~ pearl drips from my mug blooms sprawl scent in air summer's bright days and short nights~ flourished sultry breeze 24-6-2020 Third place in the Contest. Note: Summer Haiku's Poetry Contest. Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/30/2020 3:09:00 PM

Excellent pictures of summer...pearl drops, blooming scent, long days, short nights, sultry breeze. This is beautiful Deepa. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love. Keep writing and inspiring :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/1/2020 5:04:00 AM

Hi Aditi mam, Thankyou very much for the kind review,appreciation and blessings.:-) Best wishes for you too.:-) Much love~Deepa

Funom Makama

Date: 6/29/2020 3:08:00 PM

A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/30/2020 6:55:00 AM

Hello Funom sir, Thanks a bunch for always cheering me with your warm words of appreciation.:-)Am pleased to know that my works are deserved for the win:-) Best wishes.Keep inspiring. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa

John Watt

Date: 6/29/2020 2:56:00 PM

Intriguing summer imagery. Congrats on your win in the haiku contest, Deepa.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/30/2020 6:52:00 AM

Hello John Sir, Thanks a lot for the kind compliment.:-)You are indeed a super motivator.:-)Keep inspiring.Best wishes for you too. Have a great day:-)~Deepa

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/29/2020 9:36:00 AM

Good Morning Deepa, this is a lovely write for summer...love the "blooms sprawl scent in air" so visual. Congrats on your top placement. Jeanne

V. Deepa
Date: 6/29/2020 12:20:00 PM

Hello jeanne mam, Thankyou for the lovely appreciation:-) I am pleased to know that you loved my muse.:-) Best wishes for you too.Keep inspiring.!! Have a great day:-)With love~Deepa

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/29/2020 7:44:00 AM

Excellent imagery of summer you created--BIG congrats on your podium win, Deepa.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/29/2020 8:13:00 AM

Hello Vijay sir, Thanks for your visit. I cherish your lovely appreciation..:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep inspiring us. Take care.Warm regards~ by Deepa:-)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/29/2020 2:08:00 AM

flourished sultry breeze... Wonderful imagery Deepa.. Congratulations on your win..

V. Deepa
Date: 6/29/2020 6:07:00 AM

Hello sir, Thanks a bunch for giving your valuable feedback.:-) I am pleased to know that my poem won your heart.:-) Keep inspiring.Best Wishes. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Jan Allison

Date: 6/28/2020 7:05:00 PM

lovely images, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

V. Deepa
Date: 6/29/2020 6:05:00 AM

Hello mam, Thanks a bunch for your kind review and appreciation:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep inspiring. Take care.With love~Deepa:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/28/2020 4:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Deepa. Hugs Eve

V. Deepa
Date: 6/29/2020 6:03:00 AM

Hello Eve mam, Thanks a lot for your constant support and encouragement.:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring. Best wishes for you too.:-) Take care.With love~Deepa

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/28/2020 3:51:00 PM

Deepa, congratulations on your winning placement, this was well penned and very creative!

V. Deepa
Date: 6/29/2020 6:01:00 AM

Hello mam, Thankyou very much for your generous words of appreciation.:-) I am glad to know that my poem was worth to be placed.:-) Credit goes to you for holding creative contests.Keep inspiring. Take care.With love~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/24/2020 6:23:00 PM

Hello Deepa this is a lovwly poem of summer. Enjoy your evening my friend. love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2020 6:15:00 PM

Hello Deepa, I will keep on inspiring you . Enjoy your evening my friend. love Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 6/25/2020 1:38:00 PM

Hello Darlene mam, Thankyou for your tremendous support, love and encouragement.:-)Keep inspiring. Enjoy your day. Take care.Much love~Deepa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2020 5:51:00 PM

Love the imagery. Nice alliteration too, Deepa.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/25/2020 1:36:00 PM

Hello Andrea mam, Thanks a bunch for your warm appreciation and encouragement:-) Am glad you liked it. I believe your doing well. Best wishes for all your works too. Take care.With love~Deepa