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Suicide

an evil damns the stream a stagnancy so deadly, life cannot not run its natural course. ©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins November 18, 2012

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/3/2013 12:47:00 AM

Powerful one. Dark, but interesting. Always, Laura

The Situation

Date: 10/20/2013 4:21:00 PM

After my divorce. But not after my beloveds own suicide.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 1/6/2013 5:49:00 PM

A very succinct and well penned synopsis of suicide. Bravo!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/20/2012 1:11:00 PM

Exceptional! The best short commentary on suicide I have ever read. Love, Keith

Holly Moore

Date: 12/9/2012 2:46:00 AM

My sentiments exactly..Holly

Gail Debole

Date: 12/7/2012 6:01:00 PM

Hi Kathy - So sad when people think that there is no other way...appreciate your strong words and image. - Gail

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/3/2012 7:48:00 AM

When chi can't flow nothing grows aye?Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2012 9:51:00 AM

Very well done. I am sure I saw this one before. Nice to see you posting here. I just happened to see you commenting somewhere and clicked on your name. And presto, I can see your latest posts!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 11/27/2012 10:22:00 AM

Dear Kathy... wonderful play on words and use of metaphors... I hope that is all that it is and not an expression of something else... You know, Kathy, you have (I suppose) 2 Irish surnames... and you've certainly heard about 'smiling Irish eyes'... I hope... Love Terry

David Williams

Date: 11/27/2012 8:53:00 AM

kathy, great metaphors, only hope it doesn't last...well done..David

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/27/2012 8:39:00 AM

Hi Kathryn, here's wishing you hope that you will find the beavers busy at work behind the scene, you told suicide true, but please some hope.