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SUDDENLY LOST Sunset serenades disperse thoughts are her refrains smiling yet she tears. The autumn wind greets, cool breeze brushed her pallor cheeks, her head in the clouds. Rumbles crash silence, denial rush to her lips, ghost eyes snap and slit. The strawberry lies made her wait for sunrises, truth kissed bittersweet. Innocence murdered by colorful, luring masks, times were trashed, wasted. _____________________________ *** Contest Name: LOST Sponsor: Broken Wings 10:33pm, February 05, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2016 3:18:00 PM

I enjoyed reading all these, Olive. Loved that one about strawberry lies. So when is the big date?? Or has it already happened??? Wheeeeee

Funom Makama

Date: 5/12/2016 12:00:00 PM

Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/9/2016 10:05:00 AM

An excellent piece of writing Olive.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/29/2016 11:20:00 AM

Enjoyed it Olive. Love.

Samiha Zubair

Date: 3/13/2016 5:25:00 PM

Like intertwining of two chromatids in a chromosome, such beautiful two forces expressed in your poetry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/12/2016 3:10:00 AM

A beautiful offering Olive. ; )

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/4/2016 1:44:00 AM

Beautiful poem on lost. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend,bl

James Inman

Date: 2/26/2016 5:33:00 PM

Beautiful write Olive.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/22/2016 1:29:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations on your placement in the lost contest. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/14/2016 9:24:00 AM

Beautifully penned Olive, nicely done!

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/7/2016 8:04:00 AM

Beautiful senryu, Olive and well deserving of a placement in the Lost contest. Congratulations!

Len Gasun

Date: 2/7/2016 5:48:00 AM

This is a very beautiful senryu my dear friend, Olive. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Kisses and Cheers! Thanks for sharing! Thanks as well for stopping by on my poem. SM please.. love lots, Galeo

Constance La France

Date: 2/7/2016 12:19:00 AM

Olive, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest with this lovely and beautiful write ~

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2016 7:07:00 PM

beautiful Senryu Olive congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 4:42:00 PM

Olive, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA

Lu Loo

Date: 2/6/2016 4:23:00 PM

Congrats on your placement Olive :) *Smiles* -luloo

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/6/2016 10:48:00 AM

5 wonderful Senryu, love number 2..good luck in contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/5/2016 11:07:00 AM

A creative take on this theme, Olive_eloi. Lies and deceit can only bring sadness and pain. I think that the mood you project here is what appeals to the sponsor. hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2016 9:52:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2016 9:24:00 AM

What a unique approach you took to the theme, sweetie. WEll done!! I am reading lots of great entries in this contest!

Kelli White

Date: 2/5/2016 8:51:00 AM

Love is beautifully tasted Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/15/2016 6:53:00 AM

Thanks much Kelli.. =`)