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Suckered By Your Bluff

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I recently have been learning out how to play harmonicas, because old injuries to my left shoulder and right hand make it painful to play keyboard, guitar and flute-type instruments that I've been playing for decades.  For variety I bought two another harmonicas with holes patterned in minor keys.  I was trying out my D natural minor harmonica during a break at work, and came up with a country/folk style melody and thought of "I'm gonna dry my tears from you".  As I developed the song, I liked the line about being suckered by her bluff, and decided to make losing at gambling as a metaphor for losing at love as the dominant theme.  For a similar perspective, look for my song from a few years ago called Lady Luck Stomped Out.

I found you gal And felt so grand. I placed a bet And played my hand. But I was suckered By your bluff, ‘Cause what you offered Wasn’t love. I still remember, Way back when, You upped the ante Once again. The stakes were higher Than I knew. I lost my soul When I won you. I’m gonna dry My tears of you, Then I’ll begin My life anew. I’ll plug that hole Left in my heart So I can find A brand new start. I was so suckered By your bluff, ‘Cause what you offered Wasn’t love. You had me fooled For a few years, Then I woke up And drowned in beers. Now clean and sober I can leave, And I won’t even Stop to grieve. I’m gonna dry My tears of you, Then I’ll begin My life anew. I’ll plug that hole Left in my heart So I can find A brand new start. I was so suckered By your bluff; ‘Cause what you offered Wasn’t love.

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