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Strong Coffee and Onion Soup

Strong coffee and onion soup are what I need on this grey December day with an overcast sky and a mix of rain and sleet lacking the joie de vivre of either.

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Date: 12/1/2023 10:02:00 AM
Well said, d.w.! You’ve really captured a mood here…
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 12/1/2023 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Irene, when the mood strikes - jot it down. Dave
Date: 12/1/2023 9:27:00 AM
DW, your poem beautifully captures the essence of a dreary December day. The vivid imagery and the unique juxtaposition of strong coffee and onion soup create a tangible atmosphere that resonates with the reader’s senses. Excellent work! Blessings, From another Rodgers
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Date: 12/1/2023 11:10:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, good to hear from another Rodgers with a "d."

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