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Strife of the Gall

Living a life in the fall providing one has gall proof of no worth at all handwritten on the wall proves one is short is all Precept thus doeth abide concepts slip and slid lies thus are hard to hide precept is eagle’s glide corpses in dust we hide Serpents thus do slither deeds on slime thither as storm clouds gather egos blame each other deceits of stormy weather… Selah

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/23/2012 6:04:00 AM
While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:37:00 PM
I really like how you did this with three different monorhymes, john. Well done.
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:43:00 PM
mesmerizing lines of greatness Moses.. corpses in dust we hide.. powerful reflection luv.. a blessed read .. my friend.. luv..
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:30:00 PM
If we live by love's precepts, we can avoid the "deceits of stormy weather." Just look around at the political scene today and it's esy to see that "egos blame each other. The form is extraordinary as well. You have three monorhyme verses for one complete poem of rhyme. Bravo! Love, carolyn
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Date: 3/5/2012 10:33:00 AM
what a timely reminder of how we live in a world of deceit and divisiveness, moe.. you inspire me with your words of wisdom; well scribed!... selah and hugggs! :)
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