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Sometimes In silence I question citrine stars~ what streams beneath murky waters, Is hope still flowing through rusty ripples, why do we live in an orb of sheer blindness, would the wind ever seize tunnels behind the black hole, or are we destined to narrate novels too narrow and unseen for the naked eyes. Whilst the earth lies dreaming, manifesting milky-ways quilted on magical mats, wishing, hoping, praying that pastel colored patience and crystal clear compassion would vaguely sway like glowing fireflies amongst the darkest edges of innermost core. Transmitting seraphic breezes upon tender branches of silk cotton trees. But amidst the destructive defacing of turquoise heart within evergreen forests, sun and the moon still flicker streaks of poetry along the linings of tattered tweaks and wilted weed. Yet worldly impulses fail to remember that mother nature is in need of kindness, as she’s been fed poisonous petals dipped in a quagmire of ignorance. Escorting her golden spirits into an inexorable grievance, as ghastly greediness left no rosy seasoning, of soils we strolled, paths unnamed and undiscovered halt, questioning toils of intrinsic creation~ the earth lies in solitary slumber, for in delicate dreams we sing songs of tranquility, more mellifluous than the burning fumes we inhale mindlessly.

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Date: 3/22/2024 10:30:00 AM
I know the word awareness is overused and almost sounds like an info-mercial But, "we need to raise public awareness of the issue" "a growing environmental consciousness" you did it so well Streaks of Poetry Loved it, soft spoken and poignant! “or are we destined to narrate novels” what you are Ink, you have the power to express yourself and you are so much more, you are meant to be here I can feel it. Im grateful for you show care thru poetry, there is a reason for everything Empress. ;)
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Date: 3/19/2024 2:53:00 PM
It needs the heart of a hero to bring forth the truth, yes ofcourse much damaged has been done to the mother earth, your concern and care is praiseworthy. Poetry may have a didactic mission too and we can't deaf ear to the truth that actually in your powerful true words- mother nature is in need of kindness, as she’s been fed poisonous petals dipped in a quagmire of ignorance. Escorting her golden spirits into an inexorable grievance, Hats off to the powerful, truthful lines. Stay blessed
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Date: 2/14/2024 9:41:00 AM
Very impressive winning work. Way to go.Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 2/14/2024 5:49:00 AM
Ink, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, hugs, Constance
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Date: 2/13/2024 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.WOW!!! I really enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. Love your line, "I question citrine stars~." Enjoy your day with your win..........................
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Date: 2/9/2024 12:32:00 PM
Songs "more mellifluous than the burning fumes we inhale mindlessly"- you wrote a most breathtaking piece on Mother Nature, and you made a point- she 'needs' us. Another gem!
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Date: 2/7/2024 1:53:00 PM
Sadly and in our society, there is wealth generated for a few, while all of us suffer the consequences. It's expressed beautifully by you that we need to take care of our Mother Earth. The damage level may already be too much to bear. It's difficult to know exactly as we know so little of the complexity of systems we rely on to survive. We live in very exciting times. Perhaps too exciting.
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Date: 2/7/2024 12:13:00 PM
Why are you questioning the citrine stars and why are they citrine? Lovely imagery I guess.. For me the imagery of questioning "citrine stars" and contemplating what lies beneath "murky waters" sets a reflective tone, inviting readers to ponder the mysteries of existence and the complexities of the world around them. The use of celestial and natural imagery creates a sense of wonder and awe, drawing parallels between the vastness of the universe and the intricacies of human consciousness.
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Date: 2/7/2024 12:25:00 PM
Citrine here is used as symbolism, as it has healing properties and is one of the most powerful stones in the world of gems. Thanks ig for the detailed and encouraging comment.
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Date: 2/7/2024 12:13:00 PM
Your poem conveys a sense of longing for harmony and tranquility, expressing a hope that humanity can awaken to the beauty and wonder that surrounds us, and strive to cultivate a more compassionate and sustainable world. It encourages readers to reflect on their relationship with nature and the impact of their actions on the planet and each other...
Date: 2/7/2024 2:11:00 AM
Indeed dear Inky, as you said - Yet worldly impulses fail to remember that mother nature is in need of kindness.. Humans should remember that we should look after her as she looks after us. We humans do not realise how important it is to preserve our earth and not turn it into a Quagmire. Keep up the good work. Hugs Maria
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2024 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much sweet maria I appreciate your poetic presence its so nice to see you here: i hope you are well. Sending you light always
Date: 2/6/2024 10:42:00 PM
Such a tender write of what we are going through. It is as if Earth herself is speaking from her quagmires. Ink Empress, certainly you traversed many lifetimes in the company of poets. I’m so happy I found you here. And THANKYOU always for your comments on my writes. I cannot yet reflect yours. Perhaps in my next lifetime here on Earth when all quagmires have turned into the floors of Heaven. ??
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Date: 2/7/2024 7:19:00 AM
Awwn its always good to hear from you and who knows maybe you will see me too someday. Thank you so much for being so kind and generous and supportive i appreciate your poetic presence
Date: 2/6/2024 10:23:00 PM
beautifully written, what is the meaning of life, of beauty, i reaaly don't know, just share, thanks for the marvellous poem
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Date: 2/7/2024 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 2/6/2024 7:39:00 PM
We cannot escape the chemicals that are in our food and in the air, "Is hope still flowing through rusty ripples", Well penned
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Date: 2/7/2024 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear joseph always grateful for your support
Date: 2/6/2024 6:30:00 PM
You have color you have beauty, your poetry is like a reel that never ends... love it
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:08:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much truly
Date: 2/6/2024 10:55:00 AM
I always think of God creating a garden and man planting weeds, So is our earth. Perfect creation until wars began. We love to kill ourselves.
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much dear victor, appreciate your deep thoughts on my poem
Date: 2/6/2024 10:51:00 AM
Wow. This is a pertinent poem that dwells on the importance of conserving our planet. Mother Nature does need more kindness.
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much always dear Hilda for your support
Date: 2/6/2024 10:37:00 AM
Dear Ink, your poem is truly magnificent. It captivated me with its exquisite construction and powerful depiction. Once again, you have demonstrated your exceptional talent, my dear friend. I particularly admire how you eloquently expressed your support for Mother Nature, employing brilliant vocabulary and splendid poetic devices. Your portrayal of the current state of the world as dark and murky was not only striking but also beautifully evocative.
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:20:00 AM
Thank you for your kind and generous feedback. Im always grateful for your poetic support dr sotto
Date: 2/6/2024 6:40:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work that reminds us that we need to be more protective of our land and water for future generations. Sara K
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:20:00 AM
Ah thank you so very much dear sara
Date: 2/6/2024 5:58:00 AM
Another powerful depiction from you, my friend. I like your quote in service of mother nature and how you have espoused the theme in brilliant vocabulary and splendid poetic devices.--why do we live in an orb of sheer blindness--yes, indeed! --Yet worldly impulses fail to remember that mother nature is in need of kindness--True! A FAVE for your poetic prowess and your theme.
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:20:00 AM
Ah thank you so much for the fave and also for your poetic support always dear vijay i am forever grateful
Date: 2/6/2024 5:16:00 AM
absolutely mesmerizing, dear Ink. Your words about the dark, murky waters of the world right now were even beautiful...such imagery. Wow! I agree, Mother Nature (us included) is in much need of kindness and respect. We all need to be mindful and sing those songs of tranquility instead of mindlessly inhaling the fumes we've created. Your poem is powerful on so many levels. Grateful for your insights and your soulful words...have a great day, Sara
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:28:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much sweet sara im forever gratEful for your poetic presence and support, you are truly a poetic fairy
Date: 2/6/2024 5:04:00 AM
A quagmire indeed Inky, with no solutions, at least not man made ones. The earth is a beautiful gem in a black, cold universe. It is our home, and yet we rape and plunder and abuse her mindlessly, as you state. No songs of tranquility or pleas for change fall on hearing ears, only the deaf. Of course, I believe God will rescue humanity and planet earth before we pass the point of no return. Awesome poem
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:29:00 AM
“ the earth is a beautiful gem in a black cold universe” love that! What a deep comment: thank you so very much
Date: 2/6/2024 4:24:00 AM
- Why, we often think ... and we encounter black holes ... wandering on paths without names ... "wishing, hoping, praying" ... we are small grains of sand but not invisible - A deeply meaningful poem, Ink :) - hugs ?
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind and generous support dear anne lise im grateful truly
Date: 2/6/2024 4:02:00 AM
While the earth lies in solitary slumber, we inhale burning fumes mindlessly. Mother Nature is in need of kindness, but she has been fed with "poisonous petals dipped in a quagmire of ignorance." Will Mother Nature and the posterity forgive us? Our rivers and other water bodies send out only 'rusty ripples'. Your concern for a fast dying earth is so obvious here. Yet there is hope and we are not devoid of redemption.....! "within evergreen forests, sun and the moon still flicker streaks of poetry along the linings of tattered tweaks and wilted weed." What beauty, what excellent use of metaphors! Simply gorgeous, my sweet friend.... Into my FAVE.
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Date: 2/6/2024 1:53:00 AM
hope still flowing through rusty ripples, why do we live in an orb of sheer blindness,.mmmmm. would the wind ever seize tunnels behind the black hole, love how u provoke my thoughts aee papi!! pastel colored patience and crystal clear compassion would vaguely sway like glowing fireflies amongst the darkest edges of innermost core. Oooo that imagery is just timestopping!!! sun and the moon still flicker streaks of poetry.. mm u flicker my poetry aee!! burning fumes we inhale mindlessly. Gorgeous
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Date: 2/6/2024 1:40:00 AM
Gosh, what a stunning poem this is, my dear Ink! You absolutely nailed this with descriptive metaphors, questioning and introspective insight of how the earth keeps dreaming and praying for compassionate serenades, yet our souls get tamed by darkness and we 'inhale fumes mindlessly'.. This poem can be interpreted in so many ways.. A beautiful representation and use of the word 'quagmire' as well! "I question citrine stars~what streams beneath murky waters, is hope..in an orb of sheer blindness"
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Date: 2/6/2024 1:42:00 AM
I absolutely love the wordplay that glows and flows so effortlessly throughout this elegant piece.. "mother nature is in need of kindness,as she’s been fed poisonous petals dipped in a quagmire of ignorance" Absolutely heartfelt.. The alliteration is so brilliant here as well, with artistic use of adjectives and colours as well! Wishing you the best of luck for contest, this should do very well.. Sending you light and love always :)
Date: 2/6/2024 1:15:00 AM
I love the flow . Had me reading till the end …
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Date: 2/6/2024 1:18:00 AM
Thats a first wow lol you reading till the end is new dahlin

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