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Storm's End

The sun peeked out cautiously on the rain-drenched land Gathered her rays across the skies' way toward the shore’s tight-packed sand Stopped of a sudden, as she noticed a flower ~ petals upward, smiling “Yes I can”

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Date: 5/2/2024 3:38:00 PM
glad i came across this - impactful in its brevity
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/2/2024 8:06:00 PM
Here's to sunny days and positivity, Mat! ~ Gershon
Date: 3/15/2024 6:55:00 AM
Oh I love this. Great ending too. I wish the sun would peek out here on this gloomy rainy day. This is a Fave for me. Sweet :)
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Date: 3/15/2024 5:33:00 AM
a delightful read with inspiration layered within your words. Lovely, symbolic image you created
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Date: 3/15/2024 1:02:00 AM
Love the imagery and symbolism within
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Date: 3/14/2024 9:13:00 PM
Love this one Gershon. A favorite for me. There is so much inspiration in these few words. It would not surprise me if this little gem of yours made POTD. Regardless it is a Fantastic piece, loved it. May all our young kids in the world always overcome and say yes I can.
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