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Storm's Comin

I can smell it in the air. Almost taste it Before me lies a solid gray horizon Dark clouds hastily trip across the sky Orange streaks peek through rents in their fabric Storms comin!!! Anchored near the shore a restless dinghy Rocks nervously in anticipation Rolling thunder whispers in the distance Flickers of lightning reveal it's presence Storms comin!!! The breeze stiffens escalating the scent of rain Ripples in the lake run further up the sand As if they were seeking refuge there Storms comin!!! I feel the urgent raindrops sting my face Falling as do arrows from the bow The wind whipped rain pounces on the water And the tethered dinghy struggles to be free It's here!!!
12/06/2011

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Date: 1/13/2012 8:42:00 AM
The poem builds as a storm builds....then crashes down. I felt the suspense and saw the scenery. Well done !!! Love it when a poem stirs the senses !! Enjoyed !!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/13/2012 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Debra. Kind comments indeed.
Date: 12/8/2011 8:35:00 AM
This is beautiful!!! i love it :).. keep writing :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/8/2011 10:14:00 AM
I appreciate your comments Hannah. Thank you for the encouragement
Date: 12/7/2011 12:32:00 PM
Bob this is great...you must have been there and done that too...I felt as though I were there again...enjoyed....Marty
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/7/2011 2:12:00 PM
Yup Marty. Have watched a few. Always liked them.
Date: 12/7/2011 10:57:00 AM
Hi Bob, this is so awesome, enjoyed . harry
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/7/2011 11:01:00 AM
Thanks very much Harry
Date: 12/7/2011 6:46:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more Bob. This time of year we all are so busy and I for one don't have a lot of time right now but I will try. I love reading the poetry of the many talented poets here at the Soup. Hope to be reading your poetry for many more years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/7/2011 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Carol. I love reading all the creative offerings also.
Date: 12/6/2011 11:44:00 PM
I remember those sudden storms on the boardwalk in Atlantic City and Ventnor, NJ. You have described them very well in this write.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/7/2011 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Bob.
Date: 12/6/2011 9:53:00 PM
This is really NEAT. I love the formatting and the way it builds to it's climax. Great descriptive writing, Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/6/2011 10:12:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 12/6/2011 4:19:00 PM
I wish I had the 'something' to run in the srorms like we did as kids! without fear! very very nice write! Light & Love
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/6/2011 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Debbie. One of the misfortunes of life is innocence lost. I loved it too
Date: 12/6/2011 11:30:00 AM
Good one, Bob. I can feel the tension growing as the storm moves in. Kim
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/6/2011 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Kim. That is what I hoped to portray
Date: 12/6/2011 11:15:00 AM
I love this atmospheric piece, Bob
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/6/2011 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Jack. Glad you liked it.

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