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Storm Tossed Skies

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across storm tossed skies lightning strikes launched their gauntlets ~ thunder's voice bellowed

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/15/2024 6:16:00 AM

Dear Lin, Wonderfully descriptive haiku. You captured the power of thunder in such a brief format. Happy Valentines day a touch belated Lin and thank you for your recent visit and comments as well.

Lin Lane
Date: 2/17/2024 8:33:00 PM

Happy thoughts are never late, Nancy. Thank you for the read and fine comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2024 2:43:00 AM

- Excellent haiku, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 2/17/2024 8:32:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/14/2024 3:19:00 PM

Ooh…I can feel it! Well done, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 2/17/2024 8:32:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim.

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/14/2024 12:06:00 PM

A very descriptive haiku Lin, one can see and feel why our ancestors were so terrified of thunderstorms, and made offerings to the gods to try placate them, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 2/14/2024 12:33:00 PM

I don’t fear thunderstorms, but then we can escape them. Our early ancestors could not. Thanks for liking this one, David.

Sand Blown

Date: 2/14/2024 10:34:00 AM

....beautiful metaphor: 'storms can be beautiful in the sk-eye-s'......stan

Lin Lane
Date: 2/14/2024 12:31:00 PM

They certainly can be, Stan. Thank you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/14/2024 9:19:00 AM

"Storm Tossed Skies" is a wonderful Haiku write/picture. I have been in some very bad storms. Happy Valentine’s Day..........................

Lin Lane
Date: 2/14/2024 12:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/14/2024 8:55:00 AM

exquisite Haiku in perfect form. Loved it...especially liked your use of the word 'gauntlets.' Well done, Lin. Have a pleasant day, hugs, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 2/14/2024 8:57:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. It's a beautiful day off Lake Pontchartrain. I'm about 2 miles south of it.