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Stolen Heart

You stole my heart I could not see but I felt it inside of me You stole my heart you did not think that yours would part but I stole it, in return Something's gone but something's left It is your heart that I have kept You stole my heart so I stole yours but would I let go if you let go first? No, I want your heart and you want mine Is this something rare to find? Yes, a heart like yours is rare to find I'll take your heart if you'll keep mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/8/2009 2:54:00 PM
this was beautiful! the emotion was strong and vivid. i really enjoyed this one as well! you are an excellent poet!
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Date: 5/7/2009 5:06:00 PM
Beautiful! =)
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Date: 3/15/2009 2:24:00 PM
You are a very strong woman Maryam! Be carefull with those 2 hearts! Love & Light
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Date: 3/15/2009 11:39:00 AM
Maryam, This is an enchanting poem beautifully written. Most enjoyable thing is simplicity and purity of thoughts -free of complications. I pay my tribute to you. Thanks also for your eloquent comments on my poem 'Do not Knock'. God Bless You. - Sincerely, Mohammad.
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Date: 3/14/2009 10:38:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Maryam! You've captured the emotions very nicely and I, too, lve the last stanza of this very touching rhyme. Well done! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:56:00 PM
Awe...this is so sweet...I especially like the last stanza...
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Date: 3/11/2009 8:43:00 PM
WOW! Extrordinary poem! Thanks for the lovely comment on my featured poem "Life is a Tree." With I being 13 and getting great comments from wonderfull poets like you, means alot to me! Much love, ~Catherine
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Date: 3/11/2009 7:37:00 PM
So bittersweet...well done, Maryam.
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Date: 3/11/2009 2:53:00 PM
This would make a perfect Valentine Card....always, Christy
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