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You of carefree smile, Tips of small white teeth Dividing plump blush lips, Pause here, stay a while With me, sit beneath This evening sky that grips Our hearts as though We'd been laid bare, Exposed for heav'n to see. Stay here. Do not go. This moment ever rare, Dreamily vivid to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/6/2012 2:27:00 PM
Sounds inviting, some have no sense but there are other skies and other lips waiting. I enjoyed the thought in this Chuck! :)
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Date: 4/2/2012 6:44:00 PM
Chuck, that evening sky sounds good, right about now... the carefree smile..really hits home... enjoyed,..p.d
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Chuck Novotny
Date: 4/3/2012 12:05:00 AM
8) Thanks for your comment. - Chuck
Date: 4/2/2012 5:30:00 PM
this is beautifully romantic! i hope she stayed.
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Date: 4/3/2012 12:04:00 AM
While she did not we remain friends. Thanks for the thought, and for the read! - Chuck
Date: 4/2/2012 4:29:00 PM
Very dreamy! Fantastic, descriptive and lovely write. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/2/2012 3:38:00 PM
This is a nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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