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Stay With Me

STAY WITH ME Stay with me, hold my hands so tight. Stay with me, I need you here by my side. Stay with me, until the clouds get dark. Stay with me, I'll take you somewhere we can hide. Stay with me, you are the only one I want. Your breath,your smell that make me high. Stay with me, I want this room to burn on fire. I'll let you win this broken heart if you'll stay with me ,tonight. Stay with me, I need you here by my side. Stay with me then hold my hands,'til clouds get dark. Stay with me, there's somewhere else that we can hide. Stay with me, I'm begging for a one night stand. This life isn't be this way before, When I met you, I broke the rules. I became free and saw the light. So please stay with me ,tonight! Stay with me, the time is short. You'll be gone soon in open door. Stay with me until my eyes were closed. So I can save the memories when you stay with me, tonight. written: 4/30/2014

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/10/2017 12:06:00 AM

There is so much passion and LIFE in this piece Aiyah, it felt very lyrical, like the emotions were so strong, they were bursting out in song! I love everything about this, the feelings so excitingly expressed, a true joy to read! many blessings to you :-) lynn

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 7/30/2015 6:35:00 PM

i see that you use stanzas in this one. The texture is song like which is cool. But please watch the grammar. In line 13 "this life isn't be this way before", is this purposeful? (isn't be = hasn't been) Line 18 "you'll be gone soon in open door", do you or can you mean "through an open door"? Yet overall...I'll stay. :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 7/30/2015 6:58:00 PM

Thanks J Hamilton for the best observation. Your English polished it even better :O) Thanks for staying and reading all through out . ^_^ All the best for you!!

Dave Timperley

Date: 7/21/2015 11:36:00 AM

The consensus seems to be this is a song, I was singing it to myself. It's a lovely write. God Bless. D.

Neil Mcleod

Date: 7/19/2015 11:43:00 PM

Heart rending and appealing I think it most lyrical. I can almost think it a song. There is a sadness in the content so significant of our time.

Daniel Schack

Date: 7/19/2015 8:51:00 PM

very nice. we need more of such sentiments. please look at my poems and possibly comment. thanx, daniel schack

Temajung Michael Tanjang

Date: 6/26/2014 3:29:00 PM

keep up miss i thought i was the only genius really love to see you

Brooke Dylan

Date: 5/7/2014 12:04:00 AM

THIS SHOULD BE A SONG... it is wonderful to read. I can hear the verses in my head... You should read it or sing it on you tube.. wonderful writing Brooke

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/7/2014 8:38:00 AM

Thank you,Brooke for this wonderful compliment!!! .. :O)) this is much appreciated!!! ..:O)) xoxo

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/4/2014 2:17:00 AM

Beautiful urgency for genuine love. This poem grabs my heart. Its just so beautiful, and a FAV. J.A.B.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/4/2014 4:46:00 AM

Thank you, Justin!! .. :O)) OXOx

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/2/2014 9:48:00 PM

Love this poem for it's passionate lines and emotions put forth, great job here girl, it content is very expressive and erotic but it's done with great taste not an easy mix to obtain but you've done it well. glad you enjoyed my dragonfly. cheri loved what you had to say about it also

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/4/2014 4:44:00 AM

HI Cherl..thank you too for visiting my poem and for this wonderful comment!... OXOX :O))

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/1/2014 12:52:00 PM

Hi AiyaH: A beautiful poem that should be set to spanish music and sung in spanish. Comó no!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/1/2014 12:50:00 PM

Hi AiyaH; a beautiful poem that should be set to spanish music. My compliments!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 1:13:00 PM

Wow!! Thank you Ralph.. this is so good!! ..:O)) I wish I could have a chance to put a melody on it... But i don't know how to play any instrument.. :O(((

Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2014 9:04:00 AM

The longing in this poem is felt throughout; go for it girl and surely there will be many passionate memories to cherish. :) // paul

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 9:29:00 AM

Hi Mr. Callus... I'm so grateful to receive a comment like this from you!! .. Yeah!! ..we're now 12 years-in-the-making... still full of passion and desire live w/ us together... !! Thanks a lot!! :O))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2014 7:25:00 PM

gosh, it's so lovely, it could almost be a song. Lyrical and sweet!!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 7:22:00 AM

OMG! .. I didn't expect that you'll like it, Andie.. I'm so touched!! .. Thanks a lot!! you're so sweet ,my friend!! ^__^ ..big hugs!! ^__^

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/30/2014 5:57:00 PM

aiyah let's get the guitar and play it on.. :D this full of longing and wishes... lil sad but romantic write.. :), hugs hugs from here olive.. :D GBU sweets..

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 7:21:00 AM

hey sweet girl!!! ..THANK YOU!!! .. I love your new avatar... :O)) Your visit and comment is deeply appreciated.. so keep doing it.. haha... Thanks ha.. It means a lot ,you know it?!?!.. lol.. ^__^ oxox

Mohammad Abedin

Date: 4/30/2014 5:21:00 PM

a nice poem

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mohammad!! :O))

Ivo Cos

Date: 4/30/2014 4:43:00 PM

Wow! i'm definitely learning a lot from MR. Callus, yourself & many other superb poets here. This 1 is a true masterpiece, indeed.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/1/2014 7:16:00 AM

Hi Ivo ~~( I love your name guy!! )~~ Thank you so much for this great comment... I feel so proud!.. I know you can do better than mine.. So keep your pen high!! ^_6

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/30/2014 3:42:00 PM

Thanks guyz for commenting... this poem actually made to irritate Charlotte.. :o]]] thanks for the support!!! ^_^

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/30/2014 3:19:00 PM

Whom Wouldn't Wish To Stay With Such Beauty, Hear Her Whispers Aside, Fragrant Time Yet There Is No Time, When All One Finds, `Is She`...I Am Going To Favour This Beautiful Painting: It's Priceless....Love, Jeremy *

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/30/2014 3:40:00 PM

How sweet of you, Jeremy!!!.. Thanks for believing in my poem.. for faving it!! You are much appreciated... longingness can be replaced by tons of love that we can receive... Thanks a lot!!! ^__^

Tim Smith

Date: 4/30/2014 2:08:00 PM

Oh my sweet sweet AiyaH I feel your heartache......I wish I could give you a big hug....Tim

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/30/2014 2:27:00 PM

Hey Tim.. just a hug?!!... it isn't enough... lol... but your comment will do make me happy somehow!! :O)) Thanks for dropping by... ^__^

Deborah Shiells

Date: 4/30/2014 1:25:00 PM

Hi Aiyah, This is really a great write!! A lot of sincerity and emotion~ Thanks for this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing it with us here:~) Peace, Deborah

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/30/2014 1:47:00 PM

Hi Deborah,,, you are real sweet and kind person I love to know more here in site..Thank you for always giving my poem a positive remarks!! ..:O)) love and hugs!! ^__^