Stars

You are the star you wish to reach Stars do not fly higher than yourself Nor are they above you....... You already are a star and the dream you wish to reach......... You are a dreamer, a star..... You are for keeps!

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Melanie Samuel

Date: 9/6/2010 3:45:00 PM

I like this poem quite a lot. I can find myself relating to wanting to reach for my dreams... I just haven't realized that I am the star and the dream and that everything that I need has already came true. Very nice read.

Kareena Green

Date: 8/19/2010 2:59:00 PM

I lIke Your Poem I found it very insparational which made it more intresting :) Luv kareena

Diiamond Rich

Date: 8/19/2010 8:12:00 AM

Enjoyed this interesting piece of poetry you have written here. Also, will have to read more of your work as well. Have a great day

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2010 10:09:00 PM

So short but so cute!! Me likes! andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/18/2010 2:21:00 PM

I personally LUV stars Susan and this poem is so unique in its read.. my Mom always bought me something with a star on it.. jewelry, note paper, clothes, paintings, .. so awesome to recall this from your words .. enjoyed my friend.. ciao from Italy ..luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2010 11:05:00 AM

Glad that you wrote such an encouraging write..Enjoyed..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2010 10:25:00 AM

What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Susan. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/18/2010 9:46:00 AM

reminds me of one of my favorite songs by earth, wind, and fire...shining star. you are a shining star today. thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/18/2010 9:19:00 AM

I like...TAH