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Stardust In Dreams

Stardust dreams of you in my teens remain sacred in hours spent wishing you would be mine to cherish, to kiss, to love. It was not to be but your handsome face still lingers in my thoughts, in church choir songs where you gently reached out to touch my long auburn hair. 6-14-20 ~Third Place~ STARDUST Poetry Contest Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Lewis Nyaga

Date: 9/22/2020 6:56:00 AM

A lovely write, delivered with ease.. congrats on your win

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/25/2020 9:46:00 AM

Hi Connie, belated congratulations on yout win in the contest, with another exceptional write. You can never beat those stardust dreams, they touch the heart most deeply, as do your words. You have the gift of touching the heart with the visions your gentle words do sing. Another fav, Connie. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2020 4:29:00 PM

I see this one I had not even congratulated let alone commented to yet. My goodness. What is wrong with me. Did not even know dear Matt had passed away several months ago. Time is flying faster than superman these days. This was just gorgeous, Connie, and thanks so much for leaving all those recent comments for me on my poetry.

Eric Boddie

Date: 6/29/2020 10:13:00 AM

ahhh....so many teenage dreams....thats when my pen first learned to sing....chasing girls without a care....passing notes, pulling hair....longing so much just for a kiss....holding hands, cant you reminisce....you took me back connie....lol

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/22/2020 8:03:00 PM

A reminder that the little things are actually the big things in time.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Caren. Memories bring joy. xxoo

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 2:07:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win Connie. Blessings and love :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 10:37:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/21/2020 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations dear Connie a wonderful trophy win - such a sentimental, touching poem, so glad and happy for your win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 10:37:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer. It was long ago but the memories are still fresh. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2020 10:47:00 AM

Back with congrats, Connie on your podium win.

Joseph May

Date: 6/20/2020 6:25:00 AM

A touch still lingers on in stardust dreams, Beautiful write Connie, Congrats on your win..

James Inman

Date: 6/19/2020 10:55:00 PM

How touching Connie. A beautiful write.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 6/19/2020 10:36:00 PM

Wishing you would be mine....lovely...this is the only one thought that keeps love alive ...Such a well composed verse. Congratulations dearest friend.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/19/2020 7:29:00 PM

Hello Connie … nostalgic and a lasting memory. Another fine verse from you Connie - Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/19/2020 10:46:00 PM

The one that got away! Actually we moved away so I had no chance. thank you Lindsay. xxoo

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/19/2020 6:53:00 PM

This sounds real...did this really happen...Lovely write

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/19/2020 10:44:00 PM

Yes it did. I was so shy I am sure I blushed when I felt him touch my hair. I was thrilled. Had we not moved away maybe I might have had a slim chance with him. I will never know. Thank Arturo. xxoo

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/19/2020 1:00:00 AM

I agree, with all below, this is a beautiful poem....I'm sure nette will love it....

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/19/2020 10:45:00 PM

Thank you Harry. I was glad to get on her winning list. xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/18/2020 3:58:00 PM

This is so beautiful, nostalgic, and sweet, Connie! Janice

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/18/2020 8:52:00 AM

A clear sweet memory that brings us right there to it. Well done Connie :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/18/2020 4:50:00 AM

AWWWWWW.....how delectably sweet! :) LOVED THIS. Memories certainly linger, dear. Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 4:04:00 PM

Some are unforgettable as are mine for him. Thank you very much Eileen. Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/18/2020 3:25:00 AM

Teen love and memories will never be forgotten - I was sixteen years old and the boy next door serenaded me every morning in our front garden. They were going back to Scotland and told his parents that if couldn't marry me now he would stay behind his parents came over to chat to my parents, and he only sixteen also. They talked some sense into him and he left - I was heartbroken. Thought I would share this with you. Absolutely delightful poem, Good luck. blessings dear Connie Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 4:03:00 PM

I believe love can happen to anyone of any age and some marry in their teens and it lasts a lifetime. Sorry you had to go through that Jennifer. Thank you very much. xxoo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2020 2:57:00 PM

Sometimes we just can't forget the one that got away, Connie. Your poem is filled with longing and it's beautifully written. I'm sure Nette will like it. Best wishes in her contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 4:00:00 PM

That is so true Carolyn. We had to move away or I may have had a chance with him. I will never know. He may even be dead by now. Thank you. xxoo

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/17/2020 4:16:00 AM

Gosh this is such a soothing melodious write Connie! Love how you weave memories from a corner and they gradually drip to engulf the whole verse. Best wishes for the contest :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/16/2020 2:41:00 PM

We wondered what kept you going to church …..! Aloha! Rico

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/17/2020 2:10:00 AM

LOL....He was an Adonis and I joined the choir because of him, though I am not a great singer at all. Thanks Rico.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/16/2020 8:14:00 AM

Such a captivating poem, Connie...you reminisce while going back so many years, and yet this tender memory is still very vivid. a fav ~ Warm regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/17/2020 2:13:00 AM

He was breathtakingly handsome, but acted humble and not conceited Paul. Unforgettable! He had a girlfriend, but at least he noticed my hair. Thank you so much for honoring this poem with a Fave Paul. I appreciate it very much. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/16/2020 7:25:00 AM

How sweet this is! A beautiful write, Connie, evoking love and romance in astral dreams.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/17/2020 2:14:00 AM

Soon my little granddaughters will be feeling like this. I will share this with them then. Thank you very much Vijay. Blessings xxoo