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Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light like crystals emptied from a bowl to dust the skies from some great height! Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light, you sweeten up my somber night. Delight the lone and searching soul, oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light like crystals emptied from a bowl.

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Date: 4/13/2018 10:03:00 PM
An exquisite poem and the form enhances the imagery beautifully, Andrea.
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Date: 9/28/2017 4:02:00 PM
This is so lovely, Andrea. It paints such a beautiful (sky)word picture in my mind and makes me like the triolet.
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Date: 4/28/2014 10:37:00 PM
Andrea What a very descriptive and imaginative poem that "sparkles" with creativity and charm. Thank you for the nice comment on my If I Were A Man poem. Yes, it is entered in the contest just for fun. Hugs
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Date: 6/14/2013 7:12:00 AM
You are an absolute master of imagery, my friend! Reading this one made my morning. I'm going to have to try this form... You are filling up my faves page!
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Date: 5/9/2013 10:32:00 AM
Congrats on this great win about those great stars..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2013 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. Another typically beautiful offering. You flatter the stars. - Red
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Date: 5/7/2013 10:02:00 PM
ANDREA, a nice winning poem once again.... PD
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Date: 5/7/2013 6:36:00 PM
Beautiful work! Congrats on your win. Much deserved... Jack
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Date: 5/6/2013 9:38:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea, loved reading it. Congratulations, see u...Love Terry xoxoxo
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Date: 5/6/2013 7:19:00 PM
You are the star on the top of the Soup!! You shine!!!
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Date: 5/6/2013 3:57:00 PM
On second thought, maybe, I would say ...like crystals emptied from a Cauldron! Have to cover a very large area, you know.
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Date: 5/6/2013 3:38:00 PM
"..like crystals emptied from a bowl" very imaginative! I should have written this line. Nice write.
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Date: 5/6/2013 12:21:00 PM
One star-gazer to another, I love your poem. RAY
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Date: 5/6/2013 5:58:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Andrea...sweet like suga'...I love it!
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Date: 5/6/2013 1:22:00 AM
I like how soul and bowl rhyme. who would have thought but you...congratulations again
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Date: 5/5/2013 11:27:00 PM
Wow Andrea. You have magic powers to be able to enter so many contests and keep up on so many replies. A real beauty with this win and in first place. Kudos!
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Date: 5/5/2013 10:21:00 PM
Oh Andrea...the title alone is a great poem....congratulations
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Date: 5/5/2013 9:14:00 PM
Very nice Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/5/2013 12:02:00 PM
Hello Andrea, really a very well deserved win amazing. Goes to fav. and a 7>>>>> see you later. Love Terry xoxoxoxo
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Date: 5/5/2013 12:02:00 PM
Forgot the the 7>>>
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:14:00 AM
nice Andrea~Yours truly *SKAT
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Date: 3/2/2013 8:59:00 AM
Such a lovely triolet, Andrea.....this one sparkles just like your personality! Congrats!!
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Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 PM
Andrea, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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Date: 1/29/2012 3:42:00 AM
Wonderful. I love it. A beautiful piece, congratulations. Charles.
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:09:00 PM
A sparkling win Andrea....congrats!
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