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Star Gazing

How distant stars sizzle, streaking in your eyes

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Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 3/29/2018 12:09:00 PM

What a gorgeous image.

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 3/30/2018 7:49:00 AM

I'm glad it speaks to you! Thanks for reading and for commenting!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/4/2018 2:36:00 PM

Hello Sarah,your haiku,is great. have a nice day my friend.

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 3/5/2018 3:10:00 AM

Hello Darlene. Thank you very much. I wish for you to have a lovely day as well!

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 3/4/2018 9:38:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Well done on your win Sarah! Well deserved!

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 3/4/2018 11:39:00 AM

Thank you, very much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2018 6:37:00 AM

Congrats on your winning Ku. Sara

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 3/2/2018 7:10:00 AM

Thanks very much!

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/2/2018 5:18:00 AM

Sarah, Congratulations on your first place... inspired the following, thank you...Mick... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ our closest star... the sun... it has a lifespan... earth will die with it... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ our planet's lifespan... once under natures control... pollution now rules... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ earth will die with it... sol will blow us all away... climate change preempts... ~~~~~~ © Mick E Talbot 2018

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 3/2/2018 7:11:00 AM

Thanks Mick. I'm glad that my work was able to reach you.