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Standing Here

stalwart i stand on the edge of this sand listening to the relentless waves pounding like my heart as i watch this storm approach the skies are dark like these days rolling on by without even a glisten of stars from skies or your eyes memories like grains of sand are twirling around in the turbulence as i watch helplessly i feel the sultry air breathing against my flesh and get lost momentarily in thoughts of you awoken by the rains falling from skies and eyes stalwart i stand alone on the sands of time

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Date: 8/1/2021 10:54:00 AM
A troubled write as you think back in time of a loved one or someone you were close to. A creative poem Sandy, enveloping a reader with emotion. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, jENNIFER.
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Date: 7/10/2021 10:54:00 AM
A sad yet beautiful piece.
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Date: 7/7/2021 11:18:00 AM
Nice penning Sandy good imagery and insightful thought too. Hope you're well these days , blessings,Gordon
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Date: 7/5/2021 3:29:00 PM
i think a first prize + Sandra
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/6/2021 6:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Brian... :) hugs
Date: 7/5/2021 7:11:00 AM
I love the imagery in this metaphorical verse, Sandy, you write these types of poems as well as anyone I know. Nicely written my friend. Hugs, John
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Date: 7/4/2021 12:48:00 AM
Thought provoking poem Sandy, a lost love or close relation in your poetic thoughts as you deliver this excellent write for us to read - well done my friend, Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/3/2021 1:26:00 AM
Such a tragedy you intertwine so well, Sandra, excellent poetry...
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Date: 7/2/2021 8:15:00 AM
Brilliant work. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/2/2021 1:12:00 AM
Brilliant dark thoughts. I always loved your poetry. Hope to see more of them. Hugs
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Date: 7/1/2021 3:28:00 PM
I could just picture the scene Sandra, a girl alone with her thoughts. Tom
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Date: 7/1/2021 10:41:00 AM
Always a delight to ride on your words--sad or happy. Another emotive write in your signature style, Sandy.
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