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Stan the Snail even has his own coloring book at https://www.amazon.com/Stan-Busy-Snail-Gail-DeBole/dp/B09MDVQLTR! ________________________________________________________ Poem written by Gail DeBole on 4/30/2013 and updated on 10/2/2018 Transit System The underside of a gutter guard Moved for mowing... Destination - 7 feet away from home. Stan the snail hitches a ride. Amusement Park Ride Clinging to the garage door As it moves upward. Clinging to the garage door As it moves downward. Stan the snail waits for a second ride. Dangerous Adventure Secretly hanging off the boy's pant leg. Stan ends up in a heap of dirty clothing. Targeted for the deadly washing machine. Stan the snail crawls away from a poisonous death. ______________________________________________________ Related Poems Stan the Snail's Haiku Stan the Snail's To Do List Stan the Snail's Bucket List - First Item

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Date: 10/11/2014 12:05:00 PM
A very imaginative and enjoyable piece! You might like my poems on Dragon...
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Date: 6/25/2013 5:34:00 AM
What an amazing imagination. I felt I was riding with it.... Great writing.... Jake
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Date: 6/22/2013 10:01:00 AM
That snail has had a busy day..I bet its mom won't have to rock him to sleep..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments on my work were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/16/2013 11:36:00 AM
love these lines. Great write. God Bless. Dave.
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Date: 5/14/2013 10:18:00 AM
Lovely read. Congrats on your membership renewal!
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Date: 5/10/2013 7:50:00 AM
Lots of smiles! Great write, dear Gail! You made my day! Blessings, Hanitra
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Date: 5/8/2013 2:39:00 PM
Cool, very real to life! Enjoyed reading it, Gail.
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:28:00 AM
Good and I love it. Nurudeen
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:08:00 AM
A nice poem. I like it. Welcome to the Soup Gail. -Mohammad
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Date: 5/8/2013 7:42:00 AM
Nice thoughts, Gail, you are welcome in this community with your sincere prtraits and memories
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Date: 5/8/2013 5:13:00 AM
Interesting lines I welcome you friend on this beautiful ground of Poetry Soup, where we all share our dreams, laughter's and pains with each other. With best wishes......Ravindra
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Date: 5/8/2013 12:58:00 AM
Captivating! Welcome Gail! Welcome to our loving family!
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Date: 5/7/2013 8:24:00 PM
Prospective is everything isn't it Gail . Good job and welcome!
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Date: 5/7/2013 5:22:00 PM
DELIGHTFUL... WELCOME!!! xoxox
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Date: 5/7/2013 5:03:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Gail...
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Date: 5/7/2013 4:49:00 PM
this is really cute. Just got in my email the message that you are a new lifetime member. YOu are the first person I ever saw them do that for. Congratulations and welcome.
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Date: 5/7/2013 3:25:00 PM
Well.... As I figure it, you saved that snail about a weeks travel time.... Great write.... Jake
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Date: 5/5/2013 10:58:00 AM
Well done,Gail!!! - - Wishing you a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/4/2013 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Gail, for the visit. some ride. hope the snail finds it's way home... like the little verse... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 4:59:00 PM
I fancy short poems.. They have their own mysticism. This poem with its mono-scene is full of meanings. Lovely write!
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Date: 4/30/2013 10:35:00 PM
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Date: 4/30/2013 7:59:00 PM
CLEVER....GAIL...LIKE IT...
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