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Spurned Love

She awoke to a blazing sun, brightest orb, day’s lover. The moon, jealous of her love, cried for the night’s loss. She, sleeping, missed the soft caress, silken touch, palest rays that beckoned her to waken and taste their sweetness.

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Date: 1/14/2024 8:43:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. I am glad you shared it with us. Thank you for dropping by with congratulations on my work. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my work. Sara K
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/14/2024 3:06:00 PM
I am so pleased by your visit Sara. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I am warmed by your visits. I hope your new year promises all good things for you. :)
Date: 8/15/2023 11:08:00 AM
This is wonderful ~
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/15/2023 2:46:00 PM
Many thanks for your visit and kind remark. :)
Date: 11/1/2022 2:48:00 PM
What a lovely shadorma, Linda. An enchanting and beautifully written piece. Congrats on your POTD!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/15/2023 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Franci! I appreciate your comments. :)
Date: 8/22/2022 3:35:00 PM
I just found this, Linda. Such an elfin quality, magical and in perfect form!! Elizabeth
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/23/2022 5:16:00 AM
Hello Elizabeth. I am grateful for your visit and supportive words. Thank you! Linda
Date: 7/16/2022 8:02:00 PM
Somehow, this gem slipped past me. Congrats on POTD, Linda. Blessings, gw
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/17/2022 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I am blessed in many ways. Thanks for the congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 9:58:00 PM
Good for you Linda!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/15/2022 7:18:00 AM
Hi Jennifer. Nice to see you. Thanks for stopping by with congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 9:08:00 PM
"She awoke to a blazing sun, the moon, jealous of her love". This is beautiful, tender, romantic and emotional, all at the same time. You paint such vivid images with your words. Congratulations Linda, on Poem of the Day. I like your Avatar, by the way. :) Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/15/2022 7:17:00 AM
Oh so kind of you to stop by with such supportive words Brandy. I'm honored by this award and by your comments. Thank you! Linda (and thanks for liking my avatar ;). hugs and blessings, Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations Linda for this well thought Poetry on Spurned Love. "The moon, jealous of her love, cried for night's loss." Unique words to include in this Lovely Poetry. Big Congratulations for receiving POTD! God bless you and keep writing...
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 5:15:00 PM
You are kind Michael. Thanks so much! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 4:16:00 PM
I'm pleased to ready your lines as Poem of the Day, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 5:14:00 PM
Many thanks Jenna. :) Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 10:57:00 AM
What a lovely poem of sweet romance and spurned love that does not fade in the new day all wrapped up neatly in fresh metaphor. So romantically creative Linda! Congratulations on your POTD! A wonderful achievement. All the best.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 11:04:00 AM
Your words are warm and welcome Sam. Thank you for the visit and congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 9:45:00 AM
Lovely write Linda, Congrats on POTD
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Joseph! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations, Linda, on your P.O.T.D.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 9:44:00 AM
Hi Milt. Thanks for the visit and the congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 8:47:00 AM
Just beautiful Linda ! I love the nuance and emotions you have woven . Congratulations on POTD! Blessings, Susan:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 8:37:00 AM
Ah, but she is blessed to be pursued by two such magnificent lovers....nicely done Linda....and congrats on POTD
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 8:48:00 AM
Thank you John. Nice to have you visit and comment! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Linda! Your striking "Spurned Love" it's just a rotation away.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Anaya. I appreciate your visit and congrats! Turn, turn, turn, Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 8:28:00 AM
Hi friend Paula. Thanks for the congrats! hugs to you, Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 8:03:00 AM
This speaks of romance and loss. Nicely done. Congrats on your POTD
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 8:27:00 AM
Thank you for the kind visit Jeanne, and for the congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 7:52:00 AM
Linda, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 7:57:00 AM
Many thanks Constance. I appreciate your visit and congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 7:19:00 AM
A stellar creation Linda. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Connie. Yes, it is indeed an honor and I am gobsmacked! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 6:48:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Linda. Enjoy your day.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 7:11:00 AM
Hello Vijay my friend. Thank you for the second visit and the big congrats. I'm honored! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Linda. Nice imagery and feelings in your poem. Enjoy your special day! :-) Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 7:11:00 AM
Many thanks for the supportive comments and congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD . Enjoy :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 7:12:00 AM
Hello Heidi. Nice to see you again. Thank you for the congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 3:50:00 AM
Lovely line of striking images.... ! Congratulations Linda on your sweet poem and its honor of POTD
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Valsa. Your supportive comments are most welcome! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 2:42:00 AM
“The moon, jealous of her love, cried for the night’s loss.” ~ superb! Congrats on POTD, Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and congrats! Linda
Date: 7/14/2022 2:07:00 AM
What beautiful contrasting emotions Linda, exceptional POTD congratulations, cheers David
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/14/2022 7:06:00 AM
Thank you David! Linda
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