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Spring Is Here

spring is here at last at last wind blowing clouds like gossamer glass smells fill the air the flowers are calling bees making honey with love and pollen watching dandilions is a glorious affair while slinging their fluff all thru the air It seems I'm not the only one to jump with joy here comes the sun I hop and skip accross a lawn I twirl around till I have fallen I dance a happy springtime dance lay on the grass where sprinklers splash a sweet little inchworm crosses my toe take your time little one just go with the flow my spring my spring is here for now the sun stands up to take a bow

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Date: 4/4/2021 10:05:00 AM
What a great first poem. This made me feel joyful.
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Date: 5/23/2016 7:22:00 AM
Nice imagery
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Date: 4/7/2016 7:15:00 PM
this is a fun poem. i was smiling all the way through it :-)
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 4/7/2016 7:41:00 PM
Why, thank you so much..Glad to make you smile.
Date: 4/1/2016 10:28:00 PM
Hi Shaunda, Well written. I enjoy it.......
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 4/2/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank you again. This was a fun one.
Date: 3/30/2016 9:54:00 AM
This delightful read, light and airy.
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/30/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thank you.. Spring and summer is my thing..
Date: 3/25/2016 11:07:00 AM
Hi Shaunda, a really fun write on the joy of spring. I really enjoyed the read. It was filled with the joy of Spring. I would follow the dance to this Spring song. Keep singing Shaunda. I shall fave this little gem....Vlad.
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/25/2016 11:15:00 AM
Wow. Thanx man. Really appreciate the great comment.. hahahaha Actually, I love your comment. This is the actual dance I do for spring.. :)
Date: 3/25/2016 9:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem, enjoyed the read very much.
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/25/2016 11:25:00 AM
why thank you kind sir. much appreciated.
Date: 3/16/2016 12:00:00 PM
wow sis, you don't mess about, welcome to poetry soup.com, I finally found some of your comments, duh-o ,lol. got the all-clear from the breast surgeon. greatly relieved . wonderful poem .you are getting great responses. Beth.xxx
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Date: 3/14/2016 5:22:00 PM
Shaunda, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/14/2016 5:54:00 PM
I actually don't mind constructive criticism. I have an 8th grade education which has limited me quite a bit. Until recently, I thought all poetry had to rhyme except for haiku, since haiku and rhyming are the only type of poetry I remember from school. And those my dear, are my poetic skills. You have been so kind. I would love to read your works. The contest page for Spring?
Date: 3/14/2016 12:22:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Shaunda :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/14/2016 1:43:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 3/14/2016 11:34:00 AM
wow, this is an awesome first post. Shunda... Love SKAT
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/14/2016 1:43:00 PM
Well, thank you SKAT

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