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Flower Painting - Tulip Trio by Marion Rose

awakened by light heralding its renewal a soft petal purrs... C.W.S. 03/14/2020

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Date: 1/25/2021 6:06:00 PM
How charming... "a soft petal purrs" ~ I love that line, it's so true that the softness of a petal is magical. It's lovely to find this lovely brevity published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 1/29/2021 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Line...
Date: 5/11/2020 7:55:00 PM
seeing this one again I think, it's just so lovely!
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Date: 5/12/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thanks again Andrea...
Date: 4/24/2020 5:59:00 PM
Love the picture with the poem nice compliment
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Date: 4/25/2020 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Joan...
Date: 4/2/2020 12:05:00 AM
Nicely penned. I admire. Best Wishes.
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Date: 4/2/2020 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Anisha...
Date: 4/1/2020 9:29:00 PM
Excellent Haiku. A petal purrs awesome Panagiota xx
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Date: 4/2/2020 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota...
Date: 3/28/2020 10:51:00 AM
Love your poem and picture. This Spring I will listen close to hear the purr from my flowers. Enjoy your day........
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Date: 3/28/2020 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Paula...
Date: 3/25/2020 12:50:00 AM
Simple truths Hidden by lack of reason Waiting to be born . . . Thank you for a beautiful verse.
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Date: 3/26/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thank You Bryan...
Date: 3/24/2020 2:49:00 PM
How marvelous dear, Charlie! Excellent Haiku
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Date: 3/26/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios...
Date: 3/24/2020 9:58:00 AM
So beautiful Charlie. Lovely to read today :)
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Date: 3/24/2020 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Heidi...
Date: 3/23/2020 6:02:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku!
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Date: 3/24/2020 11:53:00 AM
Thanks M.L.
Date: 3/22/2020 3:19:00 PM
Charlie, Dickinson's image is a photograph discovered in the 50's, I believe. It's one of only two extant of her. Google it for more information. Thanks for the stop by.est to you as always. / M
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Date: 3/22/2020 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Maurice...
Date: 3/21/2020 11:31:00 AM
Charlie, your poem is lovely and your image is sublime _Constance
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Date: 3/21/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Constance...
Date: 3/21/2020 10:47:00 AM
This is a poetically perfect description of a Sringtime event in the flower world. Spring is in the air, and summer hot on its heels. I love your last few words Charlie. Blessings, Jenny.
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Date: 3/21/2020 12:21:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer...
Date: 3/21/2020 1:12:00 AM
just love all the meanings in line 1,"awakened by light." thanx Charlie. shalom shalom in the PRINCE of peace
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Date: 3/21/2020 12:18:00 PM
Thanks Anil...
Date: 3/20/2020 6:38:00 PM
Hi Charlie, I always love a well written Haiku and this is just that. I love the content of this write Charlie. It is a definite fav. Your friend always....Mike. I love the Haiku, I love the spring.
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Date: 3/21/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Mike...
Date: 3/20/2020 4:34:00 PM
this I got to hear a petal purring, nicely done dear poet. Stay well, xo
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Date: 3/21/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Pixie, listen hard...
Date: 3/20/2020 2:52:00 PM
- It purrs ... a little now, Charlie :) - Lovely haiku :) - Take care :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2020 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...
Date: 3/19/2020 7:31:00 PM
Beautiful Charlie. Great imagery. Exceptional wording. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/20/2020 2:37:00 PM
Thank You Judy...
Date: 3/19/2020 9:12:00 AM
LOve this Charlie, of the awakening.
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Date: 3/19/2020 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Harry...
Date: 3/19/2020 5:18:00 AM
A great and imaginative ending, Charlie. Wish I had thought of it. / M
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Date: 3/19/2020 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Maurice...
Date: 3/18/2020 2:59:00 PM
Tenderly beautiful dear, Charlie! Love it!
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Date: 3/18/2020 11:33:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios...
Date: 3/17/2020 11:25:00 PM
Beautiful! I love Spring's arrival and feel I could BE this haiku, it thrills me so. Well done ... CayCay
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Date: 3/18/2020 12:54:00 PM
Thank you CayCay...
Date: 3/17/2020 11:14:00 PM
Gorgeous Charlie, both your haiku and the picture! Happy St. Patrick's Day! xxoo
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Date: 3/18/2020 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 3/16/2020 11:34:00 PM
Spring meanders through with a breath of color as the soft velvet petals flirt for our gentle touch.
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Date: 3/18/2020 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Eve...
Date: 3/16/2020 8:46:00 PM
I love this; well done!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/18/2020 12:45:00 PM
Thank you M.L.
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