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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Life below dusty clouds tremble restless beneath eyes of dusk serene winds blow kisses of passion on timid leaves awakening dawn in hopes of chasing yesterday's shadows o'er hills as bubbles of sweet delight burst in bloom.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/4/2024 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations Sara. Your life below will awaken in bubbles of delight - so vivid. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2024 7:50:00 AM

Back to say I have read your winning work and found it to be very interesting. Congratulations!! Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2024 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Spring Bubbles" write. Great picture with sweet flowers. Have a wonderful day/week writing away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2024 2:24:00 AM

- Back with a well-deserved congratulations, Sara :) - Have a lovely new week :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/4/2024 4:32:00 AM

thank you for your congratulatory words, Anne-Lise. Grateful for you and your visits. You have a splendid week as well...Hopefully you're seeing warmer temps and a hint of spring in your part of the world, hugs, Sara

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2024 12:38:00 PM

Sara, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful poem!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/3/2024 5:43:00 PM

thank you, Tania, for the 2d place placement and for sponsoring the contest. I discovered I like the Etheree form. Have a great evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/20/2024 6:01:00 PM

Dearest Sara, I am truly enamored by the exquisite etheree form that you have chosen. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Regrettably, my computer is currently out of commission, preventing me from fully engaging.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 6:32:00 PM

thanks for your kind words and encouragement, dearest Sotto. Sorry to hear that your computer is out of commission. I understand how frustrating that can be. I do hope you're able to get it repaired or replaced quickly. When mine decides to go on a hiatus without me, I feel lost and out of touch...strange how I've grown accustomed to and reliant upon my computer. Have a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2024 12:36:00 PM

- What a beautiful poem, Sara :) - Best wishes in the contest ... I bet a top win :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 5:51:00 PM

thank you, Anne-Lise! I appreciate your positive comments and support. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 2/20/2024 10:18:00 AM

Gorgeous! I love your original take on spring 'bubbles'- beautiful

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 5:50:00 PM

thank you, Paige. Appreciate you and your visit, hugs, Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 2/20/2024 9:39:00 AM

I love every line of the poem. Gives me to visualize wonderful spring.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 5:50:00 PM

I do so appreciate your generous and kind words as well as your enthusiasm. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2024 7:43:00 AM

Ahh!! Bubbles of sweet delight. I like that line. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Your visit to my page was enlightening. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 5:49:00 PM

thank you, Sara K, for visiting and tasting the bubbles. Have a great evening, Sara B

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/20/2024 5:09:00 AM

A beautiful etheree Sara, I love that form. Best of luck in the contest. Back home at last, had a lovely time away and had no trouble walking. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 5:49:00 PM

thank you, Tom, for your complimentary words. I love the Etheree form as well, although this is only the 2d one I've written. Glad you made it back home and that you had no trouble walking. I wondered about you during your absence. Bill & I are well. We're grateful that spring has arrived in our part of days--sunny and warm days ahead...about two weeks ahead of schedule. Bring out the lawnmower! Have a splendid evening, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 2/20/2024 3:12:00 AM

How beautiful is this, the way youve written your etheree truly is so captivating and so evocative and flows so seamlessly too as always and the way you weave words or phrase things such as “ beneath eyes of dusk serene winds blow kisses of passion on timid leaves“ wow! I love that! So heart touching, and those springt bubbles of delight i can see through your words! I just love how you write! A fave it is for me and i know this will do well in the contest too, best wishes. Sending you light

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 3:46:00 AM

dearest Ink--thank you for your complimentary and enthusiastic response to my contest entry. I'm grateful my words touched your heart with spring bubbles of delight. You're as sweet and effervescent as those springtime bubbles! Thanks for the fave, too. Wishing you a splendid Tuesday, hugs, Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/20/2024 2:52:00 AM

Oh my, these spring bubbles really melted my heart! I especially love the flowering and fragranced atmosphere as I believe I'm a spring girl :) the imagery in your lines just flourished with a perfumed essence and made me feel as if my soul is floating in the serene winds of your poetic phrases. So elegant and gorgeous "Life below dusty clouds", "beneath eyes of dusk", "bubbles of sweet delight burst in bloom" Just woww.. Loved reading this so much. Sending best wishes & light to you, always, adore that image too.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 3:44:00 AM

awww, you're most kind and complimentary! Thank you. Glad my poem gave you that floating sensation. Liked your words "perfumed essence." They were beautiful and poetic. I appreciate your enthusiasm. Wishing you a splendid Tuesday, hugs, Sara

Joseph May

Date: 2/19/2024 7:36:00 PM

"Serene winds blow kisses of passion on timid leaves", Wonderful write Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 3:42:00 AM

thank you, Joseph, for your complimentary and kind words.Have a pleasant Tuesday, Sara

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/19/2024 7:09:00 PM

I see you are catching up with types of poems and are acing them! I love bubbles too, beautiful image. xo Anaya

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 3:42:00 AM

thank you for noticing my use of a couple of different poems! I appreciate your complimentary words. I love bubbles too...effervescent almost magical they are hugs for the day, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/19/2024 6:36:00 PM

I love bubbles, especially ones like these, :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 3:41:00 AM

gosh, me too, Rose...You're so sweet...thank you my bubbly poetess friend, hugs, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 6:17:00 PM

Very uplifting and vibrant poetry, Sara. Just what we need as we wait for the changing of the seasons. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 3:38:00 AM

thanks, dear hubby, for your thoughtful words...I agree, we need lots of tiny bubbles of hope as we wait for spring to unfurl, hugs, me PS Remember the song "Tiny Bubbles?" Tiny bubbles (tiny bubbles) In the wine (in the wine) Make me happy (make me happy) Make me feel fine (make me feel fine) Tiny bubbles (tiny bubbles) Make me warm all over With a feeling that I'm gonna Love you till the end of time So here's to the golden moon And here's to the silver sea And mostly here's a toast To you and me