Spring

Months Warmer Longer days' Limb's glimmer lush Courtesy appease Proudly budding spectrum Of flowers spellbinding bees, Butterflies, and hummingbirds' flit Near, far as season inspires in an Open chattering immense field in spring. 2/20/2024

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Jcb Brul

Date: 3/5/2024 6:52:00 AM

What a splendid rendition of spring beauty in its sheer simplicity! Congratulations dear Eve.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/4/2024 8:35:00 AM

Lovely Eve. Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2024 7:52:00 AM

I have read your winning work and found it to be very interesting. Congratulations!! Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2024 7:30:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Spring" write again. I cannot wait for spring. I love this time of the year.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away..........

Valsa George

Date: 3/3/2024 7:36:00 PM

A lovely Etheree, dear Eve with bees, butterflies and hummingbirds abounding. Congratulations on your winning placement!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2024 12:43:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful poem!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/21/2024 4:21:00 PM

a lovely Etheree, Eve....it flows beautifully and captures that 'springy' feel of spring. I liked 'limbs glimmer lush.' I like that part of spring the best. Have a wonderful evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/21/2024 11:31:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Spring" write. It is all most here. The very best time of the year... Have a blessed day writing away............