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Splitsville

tear open the seal thick folded papers land loud eviscerated like our forever, but how soulmates aren’t supposed to end 9/18/16

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Date: 4/1/2018 10:39:00 AM

A shattering feeling I suppose many have felt. You've captured someone's pain perfectly Tom.

Date: 9/27/2016 3:05:00 PM

I like how you did Splitsville. IS this for lament contest? GOtta get busy on that one!!

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/27/2016 3:57:00 PM

For the previous contest, but entered in the lament as well...multitasking. :-)

Date: 9/18/2016 10:27:00 PM

Sometimes I wonder why we even bother with wedding vows anymore. Soulmate has somehow gotten confused with playmate. This is a good one, Tom!

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/19/2016 6:50:00 AM

Thanks, Daniel! Agreed.

Date: 9/18/2016 8:24:00 PM

Excellent Tanka Tom...we wish forever wouldn't end.

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/19/2016 6:52:00 AM

Thank you, Tim!