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Spirit Mountain

Serene Mountain’s so inviting With clad stone cold faces peeking Blue mirror pools so exciting Quivering patches touch my skin Leaning against a moaning wind Rapped in a rapture of heavens grin Inspired by John freeman’s “A Nature Verse contest”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/8/2013 6:13:00 PM
Very nice depiction of a serene place. "leaning against a moaning wind"....a line that gives the poem expressive character. :)
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Date: 12/20/2011 7:07:00 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Laura. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2011 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Laura
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Laura. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:54:00 PM
Laura, beautiful piece, Serene is the word. thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Second place entry. Agape, Moses.
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:11:00 PM
Very nice write Laura. Congratulations on placing 2nd. Well done
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:50:00 PM
CONGRATS LAURA ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETRY MY FRIEND..LUV..
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:31:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “This Is Absolutely Beautiful As Is The Image It Paints of Yourself My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Laura! *^_^* The Lovely Rhyme Flowed As A Perfect Mountain's River Bringing Splendours of Serenity Unto Ones Own Spirit *^_^* And for Some Reason I Could Envision Your Beauty Standing Aneath Crystal Blue Waterfall *^_^* Very Lovely &, Thank You, for Blessing Myself With Your Precious Visit, My Dear!” *^_^* Two Faves & My Love Unto Your Pretty Light, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:46:00 PM
Sensational Laura. The best to you in Moses' contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2011 9:58:00 AM
Wonderful Laura!But John wants only 6 lines.Visit his contest page.....regards.
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:19:00 AM
beautiful.....nice one..you are really giving me a inspiration..love your work
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:30:00 AM
a majestic write Laura my friend.. a stunning piece of creative poetry from the gorgeous photo.. every lines expressive and poignant .. lovely visuals..good luck in this contest luv..
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:07:00 PM
wow, you sure nailed this contest. What a gem, laura. Sure to do well!
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Date: 9/13/2011 10:18:00 PM
A lovely verse that has a native Indian feel to it. I could imagine them in this environment and love the images you paint with words.
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