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Spice

He woke with hope and love for the new day And darkness met him and betrayed The hope vanished but brought cleansing And like the soldier onto knee bending If You are there help me like a bottle of wine A slight burn and You grow and deny It was only one time and her heart lies Spelled it out and written by He was there between each adjective That holy love linked each conjunctive If You came with your advice Her love cost more and price In front of the screen he touched the keys Writing the note with hope relieves But she has deleted his record and moved over In a seedy hotel they meet and my love choked her You told me once You told me twice My love was cooked with bitter spice Dedicated to Poetry Soupers All

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/11/2012 4:35:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:39:00 PM
hehehe you picked a fine time to leave me Maureen? love it mate, the bitter spice...
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:18:00 PM
Interesting work..Very expressive and descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that Haiku now rings a bell for you..I hope that you will become an expert in writing them...Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 2/19/2012 12:41:00 PM
great dedication to the poetry soupers ~always p.d.
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:16:00 AM
You have been writing so much lately! Your heart is pouring itself out like water..gosh, that's got to be one refreshing write! Don't stop! We will continue to read more....Once a writer told me to write until the well runs dry, then write some more at the first drop of inspiration. Write about anything...a bug on the wall, the way someone holds his coffee cup,...just write. Have a wonderful Sunday!! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/19/2012 8:57:00 AM
Many a relationship ends up like Bitter Spice, I recently lived it. Fine dedication to the Soupers all Patrick :)
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