Specter

Like a shadow of yesteryear Kept hounding like a vexed specter 04/25/16

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2016 10:19:00 PM

Love this!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2016 7:53:00 AM

- Very well done, great Moon Flower ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2016 11:42:00 PM

Very interesting one, Moon Flower. I liked the way the words vexed specter sounded together.

Moon Flower
Date: 4/25/2016 11:58:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words, Andrea. I just did it while preparing for another write up. Sometimes, we need to divert our thoughts into something else just to get started for the actual work. ;)

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 4/25/2016 2:39:00 PM

Your library of written works contains many forms I am not familiar with but I will be reading them all to learn! This write is a relatable truth on quite a few levels! More!!! :-)

Moon Flower
Date: 4/25/2016 11:44:00 PM

I'm glad and honored. Thanks for the kind words, Walter. :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/25/2016 9:36:00 AM

Moon, very nice, the past keeps hounding me that is for sure , 7 ~

Moon Flower
Date: 4/25/2016 10:18:00 AM

I just avoid putting any pronouns intentionally so as to appear it 'generic'. How's that?

Moon Flower
Date: 4/25/2016 10:10:00 AM

Honestly, I've read your crystalline piece and it motivated me to try to create one knowing I can do it in a while. ;) Lo and behold, here you are as my first commenter! You're indeed awesome. Thanks for the rate, Constancia. xoxo