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Spaceship

CRASH- landing in a midnight sea- this empty planet so far from me patience awaits but frustration merges- an alien extra-terrestrial so familiar to me I get close close enough shot me with your stun gun spaceship going down air dissipates one final blink ship off course- glimpse of the moon now I'm a twinkling the star you can't take your eye off the star that should have been

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/31/2014 10:12:00 PM
SARAH, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA
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Date: 3/25/2014 10:37:00 PM
Enjoyed your creative write on spaceship and congrats on the fine win, sarah
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Date: 3/25/2014 3:43:00 PM
congrats on placing Sarah good poem hugs
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Date: 3/25/2014 3:27:00 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS YOUR CREATIVE WIN POEM: "SPACESHIP" SARAH !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2014 11:49:00 PM
This SCREAMS relationship loss. But, I could be wrong. Either way, this hit so hard. "The star that should have been"...indeed!
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