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Southern Nights

Fields of stars blanket warm summer skies Songs of crickets and cicadas overwhelm the senses In reply, fireflies dot the lawn Full of dandelions and buttercups waiting for dawn Far away flashes of summer heat strike with no sound Showing distant lands and tops of massive thunderclouds Soft shadows decorate the walls upon silent ears quiet murmurings fall a transistor radio blares its tiny sound of ballgames in concrete stadiums , bright lights and a pitchers mound Overhead fans stir dark sleepy rooms Screened in porches give way to fleeting cool breezes Heavy lids with dreams in flight Soften those warm summer nights

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/8/2018 9:14:00 PM
Your beautiful poem captures everything that makes the summer season so wonderful ... Excellent work Jim!
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Jim Joyce
Date: 6/9/2018 3:46:00 PM
thank u ))))))))))
Date: 6/3/2018 3:17:00 PM
It's nice to know that someone can poetically describe southern nights just like Florida. my compliments, Jim!
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Jim Joyce
Date: 6/9/2018 3:47:00 PM
much appreciated )))
Date: 6/3/2018 10:06:00 AM
Hello Jim, your poem has made me feel like i was in this area you described.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/14/2018 9:24:00 AM
What a beautiful poem! You are really good at this kind of descriptive writing. I'm in awe.
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Jim Joyce
Date: 5/14/2018 12:31:00 PM
silly gir:)))l ..ur poems are just as descriptive as mine ..but thnx :)))
Date: 5/14/2018 6:57:00 AM
Beautiful poetry! Great read!
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Jim Joyce
Date: 5/14/2018 7:57:00 AM
thank u very much
Date: 5/13/2018 4:15:00 PM
One of the most interesting and well crafted poems I have read today. Wonderful, Jim. I remember a few of those southern nights and a first kiss!
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Jim Joyce
Date: 5/14/2018 7:58:00 AM
mmm ...the first kiss))))..thnx for the comment
Date: 5/13/2018 2:33:00 PM
- A beautiful picture of a lovely summer, Jim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jim Joyce
Date: 5/14/2018 8:06:00 AM
thank u anne lisa
Date: 5/10/2018 9:42:00 AM
I like the imagery mood and color of this one...All the best Jim
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Jim Joyce
Date: 5/10/2018 12:12:00 PM
thnx so much ))

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