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Sorrows Wake

Parts in me lack comforting it... gets tougher every day To rewrite all of our fumbling in... each and every way Suspended in suffering while... drowning in sorrows wake Shattered pieces float atop the pain on... this pathetic lake bmdavey@11/6/17

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Date: 11/28/2017 7:07:00 PM
Interesting layout, good white but I am not sure about that arrangement
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Book: Shattered Sighs