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Sorrows Pool

Nature's beauty soft and sweet And sunlight shining on each flower; Although my love shall not compete My heart beat fails this waiting hour: Shall I relate you to a dying day? Do you fall like light does in the West? For although it rises high in East I find I like the darkness best. Cynical and harsh, your veil, Displaying what is known as cruel.. But my sweet and natures softest set I know you swim in sorrows pool.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/28/2012 6:12:00 AM
Captivating write dear poet ! I love how you show compassion at your culmination Danna'lynn. Great write ! Don't mind me just peeking at some of you writes....I missed reading ya ! Have a good one my friend....much love, james
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Date: 4/13/2012 11:49:00 PM
Wonderful words of strength and resilience. You have captured what I think is the silver lining of another's cruelty. Yes, they swim in sorrow's pool. Blessings, Rhonda
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