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Soozie's in Trouble Again

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I heard a noise that sounded like a cricket Then once again, coming from her thicket Soozie cried, "I keep burping." "No," I said. "It's a chirping! I'm not gonna touch that sticky wicket."

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/27/2024 10:37:00 AM

Oh such naughty humor haha! A fun and fantastic limerick that has me giggling, Lin. Soozie's a real doozy! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Lin Lane
Date: 1/27/2024 10:41:00 AM

Lots of Soozie limericks over the years. Oh, yeah. She's a real doozy. Glad to learn you giggled.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/27/2024 7:14:00 AM

Lin, a cute and fun one, ha ha.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/27/2024 8:11:00 AM

Thanks, Tania. Limericks are so addictive. Once I begin, it's difficult to stop.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/26/2024 2:56:00 PM

I love a well written limerick Lin and this is a classic lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/26/2024 3:07:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Soozie seems to be quite a bad girl, so she's easy fodder to limerick. I even wrote about her in AP.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/26/2024 2:22:00 PM

a delightfully funny, Limerick, Lin I appreciate your humor...well done! enjoy your evening, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 1/26/2024 2:36:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. I'm not always able to balance my humor with my solemn writes, but who says they have to balance out? I just go with whatever comes to mind. Now, that I'm no longer writing for contests, I can let my mind wander wherever it chooses to wander.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2024 9:00:00 AM

What a fun/cute Limerick write/picture. Thanks for the laugh. Have a fun day writing away.........................

Lin Lane
Date: 1/26/2024 10:31:00 AM

I think Soozie needs more help than any of us can offer. Lol and thank you, Paula.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/26/2024 8:05:00 AM

Dear Lin, Oh, what a delightful limerick! I just enjoyed it tremendously. It made me smile and laugh and just lightened my day. - Blessings, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 1/26/2024 8:07:00 AM

That gives me reason to smile, too! Thanks, Daniel. I may have to keep Soozie Sagas around for a while, or at least until she learns to behave. ;-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/26/2024 8:02:00 AM

Lol, keep well away, you might catch a nasty virus. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 1/26/2024 8:03:00 AM

of some sort. It won't be writer's cramp... limericks are too short. Thanks for appreciating my humor, Tom.