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Soothing Summer

A summer breeze revives the mind as worldly cares are left behind And gentle waves of lapping seas coax weary bodies to unwind. 29.09.21 Bite Size Poem no.37 Poetry Contest Sponsor -Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 12:43:00 PM

Beautiful, Wendy ~

Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2022 7:44:00 AM

Wendy, a lovely couplet and congratulations on your top win in Line's contest ~Constance

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/6/2021 6:45:00 PM

Such artful ambrosia, Wendy! I added to your sweet comment on my entry, describing the poem whence my couplet originated, & also added a tribute ending to my couplet, James

Constance La France

Date: 10/6/2021 2:02:00 PM

Wendy, congratulations on your win in Milt's Rhyming Couplet Contest, a lovely soothing couplet ~ love and serenity _Constance

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/6/2021 2:09:00 PM

I'm glad the 'sea air' revived your sprits,Constance!Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2021 12:02:00 PM

Super imagery and love the alliteration in the title, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/6/2021 1:47:00 PM

Thank you for your constant encouragement,Jan.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/6/2021 9:58:00 AM

Congrats Wendy! this fluid couplet soothes the mind of the reader, thank you!

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/6/2021 1:45:00 PM

That's so nice to hear, James. It was taken from my first attempt at a rispetto form.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/6/2021 9:43:00 AM

Wendy, congratulations for your win. So nice to see you on the winners list. Your word picture lets us all unwind to the sound of the waves on the seashore. Hope you are well!

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/6/2021 1:45:00 PM

That's kind Sam. Yes I've a lot to be thankful for healthwise. I'm glad I 'helped you to relax!'

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/6/2021 9:26:00 AM

Your imagery is breath-taking, Wendy. And you know how I love the sea! Congratulations on your placement in my contest. You are soooo deserving.

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/6/2021 1:43:00 PM

I'm honoured,Milton. The two lines are lifted from one of my early efforts at poetry writing.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/29/2021 11:45:00 AM

nice!

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/6/2021 1:42:00 PM

Thanks for the appreciation,Rico.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/29/2021 5:19:00 AM

Love the imagery Wendy and nothing beats the soothing sounds of the waves. Hope you're well. Tom

Wendy Watson
Date: 10/6/2021 1:41:00 PM

Why thank you,Tom. I have hardly written anything recently but this was lifted from my poem 'Linger awhile sweet summer'- an early effort of mine.