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Song of Spring

Breath of Spring fill my lungs Light of Earth fill the sky Joyous Song fill my tongue Wondrous Beauty fill my eye Sound of Spirit fill my ears Peace of Mind fill the land Happiness only fill my tears Nature’s Riches fill every hand Beautiful Day fill my mind Nature’s Aroma fill the earth Beautiful Memories fill my time Power of Spirit fill our worth Sweet Renewal fill this season Unified Harmony fill mankind Let Wisdom fill our every reason Until Love fills us all inside

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James Inman

Date: 4/4/2020 12:56:00 PM

Quite a lovely quatrain. The repeating word binds the piece and helps with the flow.

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/6/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much James ! :)...you and everyone else have been such a wonderful inspiration to me! C.H.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/23/2017 6:42:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. Poetry to me is all about heart soul and expression not to mention emotion. This entry has it all. This is one of those entries that should be read out loud slowly with emphasis and pauses. Honestly. All is well within your entry in its entirety. Have a wonderful morning and day.

Chris Hagy
Date: 5/23/2017 7:11:00 PM

Thanks so much Lisa! :)...I appreciate your time and lovely, warm comments :) I have never really used this rhyme pattern, but that is just how this one came to me. I must be getting inspiration from all the great writers here! :) Happy spring :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/8/2017 7:59:00 AM

Beautifully expressed.

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/8/2017 7:37:00 PM

Thanks so much for stopping by Richard and for the kind words...happy spring:)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 4/5/2017 3:22:00 PM

Really lovely Spring poem, Chris, has a lyrical quality. // Barry

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/5/2017 8:12:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and kind words Barry...I do write songs as well and play a little guitar, so nice to know one art reflects the other:)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2017 4:37:00 PM

I am sure spring will not let you down, Chris! It has so much to offer, as your lovely poem tends to prove. #7 ~ Regards // paul

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/5/2017 8:10:00 PM

Thanks for visiting Paul:) Hope spring is lovely for you in Malta...it's taking it's sweet time here in Michigan!

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/2/2017 8:42:00 PM

Chris, your beautiful poem is radiating with music and light :) Amitiés

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/5/2017 8:07:00 PM

Thanks so much for visiting Anne and for your lovely comment:) have great day;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 8:41:00 PM

Yes, you ARE a nature boy!! I bet you would love Utah where I reside. I have lots of beauty all around me. MOuntains to my east and lake to the west and trees everywhere! Good poem.

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/5/2017 8:01:00 PM

I'm sure I would love Utah, it sounds lovely. Thanks for checking this one out Andrea, sorry I don't get that much time here on soup, but it is really nice to share this art with others who appreciate it:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 8:40:00 PM

Hey Chris, I am a bit worldy and don't get out much, so I'd pick door one. Exotic ! I also long for more time with family, my sisters I never see, so door 2 is my second. I already get lots of solitude and I love it, so I already have my door three! thanks for asking. right now I am in a rush but will see this one poem of yours.

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/5/2017 7:58:00 PM

How insightful, thanks for answering:) How nice to have sisters...sorry you don't see them as much as you'd like to.

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/2/2017 8:00:00 PM

Oh this is beautiful Chris :-) The wonder of possibility that springtime brings is felt in each word of your uplifting poem. What a lovely way to usher in the season. thank you for the "Song" enjoy a happy week:-) lynnxxx

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/5/2017 7:51:00 PM

Thanks for listening to my "song" Lynn. Always appreciate your kind words and your visits:)