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Fossilized pieces past discovery’s brink made some people think, think, think, of giant plant eaters in an artist’s sketch, how their necks would stretch, stretch, stretch. Meat eaters hungry and looking for a fight, ambush or chase, bite, bite, bite. But it took just one space rock pulled by the sun, and their time was done, done, done. They may have to stay in studios and screens if we can’t find genes, genes, genes. Dino from Bedrock, Godzilla from Japan, imagine it can, can, can. What a purple T-Rex from Texas would bring, and how he could sing, sing, sing. From a land before time filled with Ducky’s pep, good to the last yep, yep, yep. ________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/29/2019 9:23:00 PM
This poem was very entertaining and a joy to read this evening... Nicely done Rob!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/16/2020 6:35:00 PM
TY Kelly.
Date: 7/6/2019 7:28:00 AM
what a cute poem Rob I think kids would love this one with the repetition in the final line, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 7/13/2019 12:15:00 PM
Thank You Jan. Hugs back to you.
Date: 6/30/2019 1:31:00 PM
this is so different from your usual stuff. You were truly inspired in creating a lovely children's poem, Rob.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 7/4/2019 10:06:00 PM
I was inspired. TY for reading and commenting.
Date: 6/28/2019 3:10:00 PM
I love the immense creativity and imagination that went into this fine piece my friend. I had my son read it it too and he also thinks its fine poetry! A fav..
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Rob Carmack
Date: 6/28/2019 6:22:00 PM
TY and God Bless you Robert. Thank you for sharing my poem with your son.
Date: 6/26/2019 7:36:00 PM
This is adorable. My kids loved land before time and watched many of them. Can hear ducky echoing yep, yep, yep on your poem :)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 6/28/2019 6:21:00 PM
TY Sandra. I don't usually write for younger audiences, but I am happy with how this turned out.
Date: 6/23/2019 6:32:00 PM
Very cute!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 6/24/2019 8:13:00 PM
TY you Kim.
Date: 6/21/2019 8:23:00 PM
ohh, this lovely and playful spin will make you win, win, win!... so nice to read you again, rob... hi to boo!...huggs
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Rob Carmack
Date: 6/21/2019 8:27:00 PM
Thank you Nette, I hope you and Snickers are doing well. Hugs cubed.

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