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tadpoles growing in a pond anxious for the great beyond decreased numbers, fairly grim takes too long to grow a limb hiding from the larger fish trying not to be a dish feeding on the larval flies protein bars in strange disguise gain a voice before you croak caught up in a ghastly joke wishing you could wave a wand hop out of this brackish pond finally you climb a log live your days out as a frog in the water for a rinse back on lookout for your prince

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Date: 5/7/2022 8:27:00 PM
'protein bars in strange disguise' - Classic line there, Jeff. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 5/7/2022 8:15:00 PM
oh I just love this, jeff, so cute and whimsical and also profound at the same time. FAVE
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/7/2022 8:19:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 5/7/2022 12:38:00 PM
Fun! Fun! Fun! You’re an excellent poet!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/7/2022 1:55:00 PM
grandkids make you think strange things! and if you ever feel you need a shot of creativity, read the mary poppins series! wild stories, for sure! Thanks, Kim!
Date: 5/7/2022 11:59:00 AM
Clever, indeed. Jeff you have done a terrific job with this. I never would have thought to put myself into the persona of a tadpole!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/7/2022 2:01:00 PM
Well, if you get a visit from a blue heron, they won't last long!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/7/2022 12:16:00 PM
We've got a collection pond out back, and I noticed it was full of tadpoles yesterday. Got me thinking... :-) Thanks!
Date: 5/7/2022 9:26:00 AM
The metamorphosis of a frog, as seen with a poetic fairytale spin, a great one for the classroom recital, cheers David
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/7/2022 10:18:00 AM
Thanks, David, glad you enjoyed it!

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