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Some Words Are Like Mountains

Sticks and stones, may break my bones, but some words are like mountains that can swallow you in its depth, overtake you in its splendor - I've known caverns there that will wrap you in its arms happy to take the brunt of a storm made of angry remarks. Some may counter and say, "A stake can stab you in the heart," but your words came like a monsoon leaving gashes in my umbrella (what was left blew away in the winds of your indifference) You say you're a gift wrapped in pretty pink paper yet belittle those unfortunate enough to crawl in the shade of your inflated presence (laughter to fill a cathedral, too loud to hear the sound of a silent tear) Sticks and stones - so they say - but some only dream of decay because the comments you made deprived them of their essence. Why are you even Here? If not to raise people up; instead all you do is sneer and leave everyone feeling crippled with the weight of a flippant syllable. Cain may have killed his brother with a jagged rock, but some are still bleeding scarlet threads left hopelessly entangled, because all you do is talk ... and talk ... and talk (all consideration be damned, etiquette you pissed on) Is stick and stones, gonna be your swan song? Like a mantra with no end, please, say it once again, as you tell it the wind - the only witness that remembers those who leaped in late December: spread-eagled, believing they could fly, believing they'd have release, but instead all they found ... ... was the concrete.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/27/2016 11:14:00 AM
Timothy, have come back to read this again, because it called to me, still wonderful ~
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/27/2016 9:56:00 PM
Second visits are always enjoyable :) Means a lot ... thank you!
Date: 3/23/2016 3:31:00 PM
You are a poet Extrodinaire my friend! Bravo!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2016 2:20:00 AM
You are a friend Extraordinaire :) Thank you very much, Richard!
Date: 3/23/2016 12:12:00 PM
Tim, this is outstanding just like you are, never ever listen to the words of a coward who hides behind a pen . I am loving this 7 !
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2016 2:03:00 AM
Sound advice, my friend! You are ever so sweet, Broken Wings ... I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 3/23/2016 4:44:00 AM
Wow Timothy, someone must have thrown a dagger and it landed in your back. Your poem expresses the pain in dripping blood. Words are very powerful no matter the old adage. A great write! # 7 Blessings, Connie
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/24/2016 9:06:00 PM
Then your empathy for others is exceptional, which says so much about your kindness toward others. Glad this wasn't from a personal experience. Cheers, Connie
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2016 1:55:00 AM
Thank you kindly Connie! No one threw emotional daggers into my back (well, none that I can recall recently, anyway) ... but it's still a prevalent situation that many people suffer through, and thus it became a poem.
Date: 3/23/2016 3:29:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2016 1:40:00 AM
Thank you Ravi!
Date: 3/22/2016 3:30:00 PM
Well done, Timothy! My favorite moment in this metaphorically ornamented gem is in your signature parenthesis - "laughter to fill a cathedral,too loud to hear the sound of a silent tear" You write beautifully, and because you do, we hear you loud and clear...I know people just like you have described, and the damage they do. You understand it, so soar above it and keep doing what you do, being a mountain that embraces, builds up and shelters. (I hope he/she shuts up!!) Always, Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2016 1:39:00 AM
"metaphorically ornamented gem" ... now that's a phrase I really like ... ha ha :) Yes. Words can be like hurtful daggers or sheltering mountains ... depends on the person behind the words! Thankfully this isn't a personal experience I'm going through ... but that doesn't mean it's not happening with other people ... and thus, the feelings became expressed.
Date: 3/22/2016 3:20:00 PM
Yes call them out!Words can really really hurt, and some people are not sensitive to this truth, or just refuse to acknowledge it. Fortunately, words can heal as well."Why are you even.. here? If not to raise people up" That stanza is intense..why is it that people choose to break down others rather than build them up? It beats me..the last stanza is quite hard-hitting too..people like that are going to end up alone because they, as you craftily put, "deprived them of their essence"
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2016 1:35:00 AM
Hey Laura: I'm not sure why this happens either ... maybe because they are lacking something in their own lives and take their frustration out on others? Thanks for understanding and leaving your great feedback, as always.
Date: 3/22/2016 2:56:00 PM
Wonderful Tim...tell it to the wind...my favorite line that captured my attention was...what was left blew away in the winds of your indifference...that captured the essence of the person you are talking about with the inflated presence.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/23/2016 11:50:00 PM
Thank you Tim! Not my usual tone, but there are some things that needed to be said ... not my own personal experience, but we've all seen what hurtful words can do, I'm sure.
Date: 3/22/2016 1:43:00 AM
Wow my friend now that was incredibly deep and incredibly well written. I hope that the person that this is about gets a chance to read it someday, but then again for that type of person it may not even affect them one bit, sad, sad story!! Great Poetry
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/23/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thank you Brian! You really caught on to my message here :) This wasn't written to a specific person, but like you say, a "type" of person, that isn't aware of the damage their words can do.

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