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Solitary Dancer

She reels and dances in the hall of her apartment home. Imaginary leaps and whirls on clouds of magic foam. Exquisite movements to a song expressed through one pure heart. The music in the background adds much feeling to her art. She seems ecstatic, unaware of those who view her show. Bright eyes and smile reveal her soul, a child of light, aglow. That solitary dancer who flies free within herself, now occupies a cherished niche on our own heart's top shelf! Common Verse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/21/2015 3:25:00 AM
This is awesome ;)
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/22/2015 1:17:00 AM
Thanks, Debbie, for reading the poem. Yep, my granddaughter JuliEtta is a diva and loves to put on a show. Very free and expressive. I hope she never loses that childlike quality with time. Thanks for reading, again Deb. All good things be yours.
Date: 4/16/2015 3:01:00 AM
A special poem written from the heart. A 7 from me. Best Wishes, Julia
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/16/2015 6:33:00 AM
Thanks, Julia, I am just figuring out how to thank people for their comments. I have been going to the wrong pew in church. I found it now though! I love your words, also. Stay blessed until we chat again.
Date: 4/8/2015 2:07:00 PM
Great verse, Brian- simply whizzes and spins with that lovely innocence of childhood that is all too fleeting. A great write. #7 from me. Regards, Viv
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/16/2015 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, Viv. I am just finding where certain things are on the Soup. I know where to come now to return a comment. Your kind words make me want to keep trying.
Date: 4/8/2015 3:48:00 AM
Lovely dedication Brian, Such Beautiful words, I'm sure she would Love your poem as well. Bless you Kevin
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/16/2015 6:35:00 AM
Thanks, Kevin, I am just finding certain things on the Soup. Now I can find were to return thanks for a comment. Let's keep on writing!

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