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Like an avian roosting when his cawing has spilled, I mourn in grief as this shadowed night grows cold Crushed and grieving from promises unfulfilled Sorrow burgeons my heart, in bitterness enfold like unspun wool on a distaff or a poem not quilled I am overwhelmed with fear; somberly weeping beneath my rowan tree. In dour thoughts, I dwell Wisps of silver moonlight cross the sky, sweeping, signaling hope in darkness, as if it were a death knell In my den, I feel protected; sanctuary of safe-keeping My troubled eyes are in search of benevolence anew For faith and courage instead of such dismal dread How I long to take flight, trading grey skies for blue to locate a paradise where happiness can be spread sharing a drink of wassail; fruited ale of sweet brew I shall swiftly soar among shining stars at great height Fluttering my wings on journeyed path of poetic volition Never again to be lost and alone on any mawkish night No shadows holding me in their melancholy perdition for I've learned how to ignite flames of lambent light

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Date: 3/13/2024 3:37:00 PM
The picture is a great match for this thought-provoking poem, my friend. The turn before the close was gentle and encouraging to those of us that struggle from time to time with staying upbeat and positive with our poetry. Thanks for sharing! Bill
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Date: 3/13/2024 3:41:00 PM
Sometimes finding the perfect picture is half the fun of posting a poem. Some people write after finding a picture they are drawn to, but I've never done that. Maybe I'll give it a try. Thanks, Bill.
Date: 3/11/2024 5:17:00 PM
loved this poem, dear Lin. I enjoyed how the 'soft murmurings' began with sorrow and yearnings that transitioned into murmurings of hope. Your words and imagery were soft and delicate as each line smoothly flowed. Your rhyme scheme, too, transitioned easily. A beautiful piece of poetic art. I'm impressed. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 3/13/2024 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Sara for always commenting in such a supportive manner. It's very encouraging to read your gracious thoughts.
Date: 3/11/2024 12:54:00 PM
Enjoyed very much, Lin! What lovely drinks to share, physical and metaphors!
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Date: 3/11/2024 2:34:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know, Kim. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/11/2024 8:45:00 AM
Dearest Lin, What a heartfelt portrayal of sorrow, longing, resilience, and hope. Your poetic language beautifully captures the depths of emotion, from grief and bitterness to the yearning for solace and happiness. The imagery of the moonlight and sanctuary offers a sense of comfort amidst the darkness. Lin, this is a testament to the power of perseverance and the pursuit of light in the face of adversity. - Loved It! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/11/2024 10:14:00 AM
You always 'get' it, Daniel. There are times when your reviews are better written than the poetry unveils my thoughts.

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