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So Quiet

Spinning in the solitude, rounding the cosmic wheel Stuck within the gratitude, the favors from those to kill Shifting from the latitude, in search of a brand new place Sliding down the magnitude, body trembling from its embrace Ranting in a somber mood, incoherent thoughts the mind can hear Raining naked, wet, and glistening nude, barely controlling the fear Raging in negative attitude, unable to focus blurred into now unclear Resting in the solitude, death is so... so... quiet within your ear... bmdavey@08/29/20

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Date: 8/29/2020 4:19:00 AM
Hey Brian, hope you are ok... This is a deep and sad poem... I hope it is not about death...
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Brian Davey
Date: 8/29/2020 11:50:00 AM
It is what we make it is it not? Thank you for the comment my friend I hope you are doing well!

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