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Snowflake and Fire

Flew snowflake, so happy Flying fool on the light from the fire. Perhaps regarded him as the only She suddenly born already in love? The fire she whispered, be my dove, He was a beacon to her in the silence of the night. She danced a happy, silly, Forgetting everything in the night sky. The fire's burning, melting snowflakes Girl friends of her own who may be wanted Become the lucky one... But he melted them - you don't need me. Flying baby, but the heart is cold, It is not for warmth you were born. Another soul, bonfire're not similar There heart is hot, but the ice you have. But it is clear tired, who is a fire that supported, And winter as snowflakes do not count. Fading embers, he tried, he would keep, The spark for the one whom he waited that night. She flew to the last spark, He gave only to her. But the cold heart extinguished spark, Now his heart was bound dark ice. On the coals already the snow is there snow drifts, She flew off to another fire. Because he was not the only one Who in the heart of the ice brought in the morning. So fly, with cold hearts, Love you fires turning into ashes. With a of hearts take a spark, Love making in a night game. 12.12.13 ACU © Copyright: Konstantin Achapowski, 2013 The certificate of publication No. 113121201650

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Date: 4/30/2015 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations for your featured work Konstantin!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/26/2015 2:33:00 PM
PS.. thank you for the kind words on my comment >>PD
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Date: 4/26/2015 2:32:00 PM
Hello Konstantin back here once again, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 1:51:00 PM
Konstantin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Konstantin Achapovskiy
Date: 4/18/2015 3:09:00 PM
LINDA, thank you for your kind words :) I am very happy that I found this site.
Date: 4/18/2015 9:21:00 AM
Konstantin, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Konstantin Achapovskiy
Date: 4/18/2015 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback:) SKAT, I publish here a translation of his poems. Understand that the translation does not convey all, or even very difficult to read. Do you think new poems to post?
Date: 4/16/2015 7:19:00 AM
Had to re-do:)
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