Sleep Depravation

Stinging eyes, lifeless I'm longing for my pillow What will tonight bring

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2013 10:55:00 AM

- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 7:10:00 AM

Kirstie, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

Michael Ainsley

Date: 4/12/2013 9:12:00 AM

I am a ghost myself; I drift from one room to another when sleep has locked me out and dreamland seems unreachable . We are never aione in that world of sleeplessnes , and yet we are alone. Be happy Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/11/2009 1:10:00 PM

I hope the night brings something very good for the voice in the poem..well done.

Chris Roe

Date: 8/11/2009 10:44:00 AM

I know this feeling all too well.. I enjoyed this one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2009 8:49:00 AM

Been there. Nicely written Haiku. Keep writing. Sara