Sleep

It's too hot in this house and the bugs are alive, Shame they are not dead, my sleep would thrive.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2013 9:16:00 PM

TIM , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2012 8:01:00 PM

ooooh, I am imagining some awful critters in THIS one. ME likes this. I clicked on lots of poems to find something new of yours I had not read. Can't believe I ever missed this itty bitty!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/26/2012 9:16:00 PM

love it ,,,, hate it when I can't sleep from the heat ;}

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/1/2012 10:06:00 PM

What a wondrous couplet Tim! I would not only hate the bugs in the house, but that incredible heat is terrible! It's been so hot lately, ! couldn't sleep in that! Awesome work!!