Slaves of Technology

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" TEMPTATION " MY PHOTO, ©

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Oh, technology, You, robber of: Our hearts Our minds Our very souls Slaves have we become To you Having given up our dreams Our ambitions Our feelings So Here and there, aimlessly, Ar We are driven, Sightless Heartless Mindless Soulless Against our will Against our beliefs Against our humanity, Consequently, Instead, of you, oh technology, A servant of ours to be, Subservient, to you, oh technology, we have Become! © Demetrios Trifiatis 08 December 2022

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Sotto Poet

Date: 12/8/2022 1:52:00 PM

Dear friend and poet, Demetrios, this is a well-crafted poem. So accurate! Every day, I am concerned about the temptation.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2022 8:14:00 AM

- A well written poem ... a little is good ... but too much is not good ... simple as that, my friend :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/8/2022 11:16:00 AM

True, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. " Nothing in Excess. " Thank you for visiting! Blessings and hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/8/2022 5:57:00 AM

So true! I feel the pull every day. Awesome rose!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/8/2022 6:39:00 AM

I took the photo of the rose at 11:00 this morning. I am glad you liked it, my friend, Vijay. Blessings!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/8/2022 5:06:00 AM

Your words ring so true Demetrios. We see it all the time, I've heard of many ditching their technology like phones etc and they've all said how better they feel for doing it. You see it in restaurants everyone staring at their phones, no one talking. Technology may have its positive uses but moderation is the key. Tom .

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/8/2022 6:41:00 AM

Yes, I have noticed this movement, my friend, Tom, even in commercials here in Greece. Thank you for your analytic comment. Be blessed!