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Sky Aimed Growth

I sense each tree's confident stance and feel their staunch faith strive to block all ills mankind rooted that taint their sky aimed growth. My soul reels from heartbreak in limbs though fortitude firmly determines them heavenly bound despite man's selfish ways.
... CayCay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/31/2019 10:46:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2019 5:12:00 PM
wow, such profundity in your words, Caycay. I really like your entry . Congrats, my friend.
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Date: 8/30/2019 7:50:00 AM
Your strength lies in the belief that like a tree, you are capable of digging your heels in without letting yourself be influenced by others' selfishness, CayCay. A beautiful worthy winning entry! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 8/30/2019 1:35:00 AM
splendid affirmation of resilience using a tree as your creative handle, cay... so wonderfully penned!... warm congrats as i thank you for taking part in my contest...huggs
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:28:00 PM
This is a great poem and I love the ending CayCay :)
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Date: 8/28/2019 9:29:00 AM
Despite selfish ways...we're heaven bound...Nice one
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Date: 8/27/2019 6:30:00 PM
i have compared myself to trees before, they make for a great metaphor...love the way you penned this one...beautiful my friend :) hugs
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Date: 8/27/2019 2:20:00 PM
Wow, that was amazing. I felt like I was one with a tree as I read that. Indeed, we don;t take care of the things around us that make our world what it is. Beautifully done. Best wishes in the contest.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/27/2019 5:24:00 PM
If'n you don't mind, I'm going to embrace your comments for good long while. Thanks for such huggable words, Chris. I wonder if you remember our long ago volleys about my 'wow' jar cause you just contributed another. Really, thank you ... CayCay

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