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Skimming

SKIMMING surface like glass tight thin ice below a whirlpool pulls in too deep an elapsed Soul skimming the face of words left in neutral swirl vortex shallow low down beneath Scroll throwaway pointless empty Hollow © Kim van Breda—17 January 2016

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Date: 4/4/2016 8:27:00 PM
So enjoyed this, Kim. What a gift. Trying to connect with a few old friends after a prolonged absence.
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:12:00 AM
Indeed T.J., awesome write Kim! So much conjured up with a few words.
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